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miyasmind
miyasmind Gifted Writer "we don't cry, we bleed on paper..."

“Look, She's Underwater Again.“ By @miyasmind

“Look, she's underwater again,“ - This is my writing for the Underwater Contest, enjoy reading! Copyright 2018 © by miyasmind All rights reserved.

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aknier
aknier Gold Comma I need story prompts-send me some words!

Drowning in Love

Did you know that love and drowning have a lot in common? I didn't know that either **For the "girl underwater" contest**

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debadityadutta
debadityadutta Gifted Writer Superfan of commafull...................

Diving tanka #2

Tanka #2 I hope all of you enjoy..... @skye - inspiration @genevieve @stevewaldrop @chhr2103

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wethedreamers
wethedreamers Commabassador And we're a million miles away.

Underwater

Dreamlike.

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bvmbi
bvmbi Commabassador some things about "something"

the safest place

something about safety in fear

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miyasmind
miyasmind Gifted Writer "we don't cry, we bleed on paper..."

Ocean Blue By @miyasmind

The comfort of the ocean. Copyright 2018 © by miyasmind All rights reserved.

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aalderete55
aalderete55 Gifted Writer 27yrs writing caged feelings

Trapped in her ways

Broken girl

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wintermoontea
wintermoontea a bit dramatic, don’t you think?

Gone Under.

Gone Under // A short poem. - This is my first work on Commaful, I’m still messing around with it and getting a feel for the layout. Any advice regarding navigating my way around or how this all work...

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shygirl
shygirl Gifted Writer okay at writing + poems are nice

In the Deep

I’m underwater in the deep.

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b_writings
b_writings Writing to get it off my chest.

A Second Chance

Cold, quiet, alone. The first three words that popped in my mind when I opened my eyes.

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leoshe
leoshe Gifted Writer Stories that last - Amateur Writer

"Drift" A spooky old short story

Here we have a prime example of a young Leoshe's sometimes scary mind, as she wrote short stories for school haha. If you enjoyed let me know!

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josesotelo
josesotelo Community member

Alone

Alone she was.

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theokchronicles
theokchronicles Bronze Comma Hey there

Perhaps I Am to Be

My entry for the story about this girl.

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mariaaoun
mariaaoun Community member

Do fish have a secret hangout spot?

Did you ever wonder about life under water? Do they warn each other about fishers or do they organize parties?

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fallenshadow
fallenshadow Gifted Writer 17| Poet in heart, puppet in life.

Down

A story on mother. She slowly drifted away from me, this is a pondering on whether or not it was the guilt of what she did and allowed to happen to me.

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iwritealot
iwritealot I let my ink bleed away all my sadness.

Submerged

It’s dark, like the night of new moon. Like being submerged in the depth of a vast ocean.

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jojojello
jojojello Gifted Writer if you know who I am, could you show me?

You Left Me Adrift

I am only underwater until I need to breathe again.

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solxtice
solxtice ¡ωєℓcσмє тσ тнє ℓσѕєяѕ ¢ℓυв αѕѕнσℓє! •

The curse

Now it's your turn...

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writersvoice4u
writersvoice4u Bronze Comma Author, Poet, musician

The Girl With The Silver Gills

It was the Summer of 2008, and I was spending time with my family at our lake house in upstate New York. Metro Station was on my summer playlist, and I had them playing nonstop on my I-pod, as I walk...

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notsugarcoating
notsugarcoating Gifted Writer A burrito ate me

Before I Drown Too Deep

This is my voice against bullying, self-harm and those who encourage it. #stopbullying

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