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Swim Short Stories

Here are the top Swim short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "poetry", "emotions", and more.
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all the way down
hymn Gold Comma
3 years ago
459
3
45

  • swim

  • imflwrcontest

  • poetry

  • emotions

  • feelings

    • when a friendship starts to shift…
    a willow stands
    magnalia Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    356
    0
    15

  • swim

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • poetry

  • thoughts

    • a willow stands
    𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚊𝚍 𝚌𝚛𝚘𝚠𝚜 �...
    callisto_ Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    247
    0
    6

  • swim

  • crow

  • ballad

  • happy

  • sad

    • totally didn't write something for the prompt, miss it by an hour, and mix it with the new one. nahhh-
    Swimming Away
    stadarooni Commaful Star
    7 years ago
    164
    0
    19

  • damage

  • memory

  • water

  • ocean

  • falling

    • A sinking feeling. Also, if anyone gets the reference at the beginning, you are extra awesome. :)
    Sleep Paralysis
    coldcrush Power Reader
    3 years ago
    116
    0
    12

  • inspired by scripture

  • swim

  • jesus

  • sleep paralysis

  • sleep

    • A kind of dark metaphorical poem about sleep paralysis | My hands find my bed of flowers. ⚘
    Beach Bummed.
    sy Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    115
    0
    13

  • sea

  • sun

  • swim

  • trouble

  • funny

    • To the beach!
    A Fish's Temerity.
    sy Commaful Star
    7 years ago
    110
    0
    14

  • silly

  • fish

  • swim

  • rhyme

    • I have returned sillier than ever! Thank you boblong for the fishy prompt, sherlocktardis for tea, and to commaful for swim!
    E r a s i n gM e m o ry
    _daemon_ Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    101
    0
    4

  • erasing memory

  • unstable

  • system

  • deletion

  • shadows

    • Short one on the scenario where one could erase their own memories
    Swimming
    astro_the_army Gold Comma
    3 years ago
    95
    0
    7

  • swim

  • swimming

  • competitive swimming

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

    • Waters New
    lm_mullins Commaful Star
    a year ago
    92
    0
    10

  • swim

  • poetry

  • love

  • romance

    • Love poem for the prompt
    Keep on swimming.
    perwickbay Silver Comma
    7 years ago
    91
    0
    11

  • scary

  • swimming

  • water

  • ocean

  • sea

    • Something sinister.
    Swimming
    totheark Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    88
    1
    1

  • swim

    • moon man
    soyo Commabassador
    3 years ago
    86
    0
    11

  • poetry

  • lonely

  • moon

  • feelings

  • poem

    • my only friend was the man on the moon | inspired by lost boy ♫
    How can you swim?
    rowan_boi Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    85
    0
    6

  • swim

    • Enjoy!
    Small Words
    coldcrush Power Reader
    4 years ago
    84
    1
    17

  • hymn

  • small

  • words

  • ocean

  • deep

    • prompt: small words with big syllables and big bodies with invisible intents for @hymn writing prompt contest! ☼
    Memories of grandma
    iowamamaof3 Verified
    6 years ago
    82
    0
    4

  • tranquil

  • pool

  • love

  • swim

  • tranquility

    • I remember lazy sunny days
    Swimming in a $300 cell-ph...
    cuculater Gifted Writer
    7 years ago
    78
    0
    22

  • bills

  • cell-phone

  • mad

  • cell-phone company

  • stupid

    • Honestly, I had every intention of writing about swimming today. Instead, today I am angry. In truth, I am swimming in bills. Also, my talented cousin took that picture of me (on slide 10 @theresa...
    My mind's gentle sea
    orphicsense
    a year ago
    67
    0
    3

  • swim

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • thoughts

  • mind

    • swimming in my thoughts....
    Fishing.
    sy Commaful Star
    5 years ago
    66
    0
    8

  • hook

  • fish

  • swim

  • haiku

    • Swimming
    millie_bugs_ Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    66
    0
    2

  • town

  • water

  • swim

  • drown

  • sad

    • water is pretty sad. Maybe drowning is peaceful?
    all the way down
    hymn Gold Comma
    3 years ago
    459
    3
    45

  • swim

  • imflwrcontest

  • poetry

  • emotions

  • feelings

    • when a friendship starts to shift…
    a willow stands
    magnalia Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    356
    0
    15

  • swim

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • poetry

  • thoughts

    • a willow stands
    𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚊𝚍 𝚌𝚛𝚘𝚠𝚜 �...
    callisto_ Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    247
    0
    6

  • swim

  • crow

  • ballad

  • happy

  • sad

    • totally didn't write something for the prompt, miss it by an hour, and mix it with the new one. nahhh-
    Swimming Away
    stadarooni Commaful Star
    7 years ago
    164
    0
    19

  • damage

  • memory

  • water

  • ocean

  • falling

    • A sinking feeling. Also, if anyone gets the reference at the beginning, you are extra awesome. :)
    Sleep Paralysis
    coldcrush Power Reader
    3 years ago
    116
    0
    12

  • inspired by scripture

  • swim

  • jesus

  • sleep paralysis

  • sleep

    • A kind of dark metaphorical poem about sleep paralysis | My hands find my bed of flowers. ⚘
    Beach Bummed.
    sy Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    115
    0
    13

  • sea

  • sun

  • swim

  • trouble

  • funny

    • To the beach!
    A Fish's Temerity.
    sy Commaful Star
    7 years ago
    110
    0
    14

  • silly

  • fish

  • swim

  • rhyme

    • I have returned sillier than ever! Thank you boblong for the fishy prompt, sherlocktardis for tea, and to commaful for swim!
    E r a s i n gM e m o ry
    _daemon_ Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    101
    0
    4

  • erasing memory

  • unstable

  • system

  • deletion

  • shadows

    • Short one on the scenario where one could erase their own memories
    Swimming
    astro_the_army Gold Comma
    3 years ago
    95
    0
    7

  • swim

  • swimming

  • competitive swimming

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

    • Waters New
    lm_mullins Commaful Star
    a year ago
    92
    0
    10

  • swim

  • poetry

  • love

  • romance

    • Love poem for the prompt
    Keep on swimming.
    perwickbay Silver Comma
    7 years ago
    91
    0
    11

  • scary

  • swimming

  • water

  • ocean

  • sea

    • Something sinister.
    Swimming
    totheark Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    88
    1
    1

  • swim

    • moon man
    soyo Commabassador
    3 years ago
    86
    0
    11

  • poetry

  • lonely

  • moon

  • feelings

  • poem

    • my only friend was the man on the moon | inspired by lost boy ♫
    How can you swim?
    rowan_boi Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    85
    0
    6

  • swim

    • Enjoy!
    Small Words
    coldcrush Power Reader
    4 years ago
    84
    1
    17

  • hymn

  • small

  • words

  • ocean

  • deep

    • prompt: small words with big syllables and big bodies with invisible intents for @hymn writing prompt contest! ☼
    Memories of grandma
    iowamamaof3 Verified
    6 years ago
    82
    0
    4

  • tranquil

  • pool

  • love

  • swim

  • tranquility

    • I remember lazy sunny days
    Swimming in a $300 cell-ph...
    cuculater Gifted Writer
    7 years ago
    78
    0
    22

  • bills

  • cell-phone

  • mad

  • cell-phone company

  • stupid

    • Honestly, I had every intention of writing about swimming today. Instead, today I am angry. In truth, I am swimming in bills. Also, my talented cousin took that picture of me (on slide 10 @theresa...
    My mind's gentle sea
    orphicsense
    a year ago
    67
    0
    3

  • swim

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • thoughts

  • mind

    • swimming in my thoughts....
    Fishing.
    sy Commaful Star
    5 years ago
    66
    0
    8

  • hook

  • fish

  • swim

  • haiku

    • Swimming
    millie_bugs_ Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    66
    0
    2

  • town

  • water

  • swim

  • drown

  • sad

    • water is pretty sad. Maybe drowning is peaceful?