Short Stories featuring Disappointment

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stadarooni
stadarooni Commaful Star Empathy is the human superpower.

Sneakers

A million pathways into my heart. All pictures, minus the first, are my own; yes, my foot is tiny.

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Murder Street

I wrote a poem that was trying to encapsulate an unhappy existence, one which you feel bound to and you feel as if you are no more than a thing in a system. Thank you for reading. :) <3

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pro_crastinate
pro_crastinate Commaful Star I idolize your idle eyes

I'm done with poetry.

Sorry for the clickbait-y title, but... this is important.

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marius
marius Gifted Writer Off-grid poet

RIVER FALLS

You don't always need a lot of words to say how you feel.

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therinamartins
therinamartins Gifted Writer Writer, Friend, Daydreamer, Lover of Art

A Bandaged Heart


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limerence
limerence Bronze Comma Walking on the shoulders of giants.

More than Anything Else

I wanted you more than anything else.

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tipsie
tipsie Commaful Star dₒₙₜ yₑₗₗ ₐₜ ₘₑ ||| Mew, they/them

Lighters, Tissues, and Windows

YOUTH and being the disappointment kid

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anonymouswrites
anonymouswrites Gifted Writer sad birds still sing

what a joke

when you actually believed you were better, but then your’e not 👌

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writercat
writercat Gifted Writer Life is beautiful, life is sad

Nothing Behind

A poem written out of desperation.

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writernotfound
writernotfound Commaful Star "... I am the monster..." ~Loki

Disappointment

I'm trying

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bees
bees Silver Comma Community member

I Just Need a Break from Myself...

If only I could escape myself for the day...

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chelseaa
chelseaa Gifted Writer i wish to resonate

Regrets

Another no.

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nayla
nayla Bronze Comma just an emotional gal

you loved my body—

disappointment

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barnacle_bones
barnacle_bones Gifted Writer brains over breakfast

A Useless Metaphor

Something I wrote pretty quick using common idioms

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darknesscreeps
darknesscreeps try to stay out of the water...

birthday...

today is my birthday...

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akica
akica Bronze Comma Things i cant say out loud

Chest

These nights had the weights of a thousand planets in them. Her tears burned like fire on her cheeks, while looking like there were stars falling out of her eyes.

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mahaer17058338
mahaer17058338 Gifted Writer sitting in the train watching life ;)

I talked to him , finally !

hmmm , you have to know by yourself !

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marius
marius Gifted Writer Off-grid poet

PROMISE LAND

Is it really there? Does it truly exist?

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nocturnal
nocturnal Gifted Writer 18 ~ he/they ~ transmasc and tired

Terra's Revenge

I wrote a short story about the Earth and the overwhelming pain that it feels as we continue to destroy it through the eyes of a girl chosen by the Earth to exact revenge on humanity for it's mistakes...

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marius
marius Gifted Writer Off-grid poet

UNDYING

A biased one sided look at a complicated affaire de coeur.

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