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Trying Short Stories

Here are the top Trying short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "metaphors", "relatable", and more.
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i knew nothing
storm_ Avid Reader
8 months ago
458
5
57
and that was the best part

hold me like the moon
hymn Gold Comma
7 months ago
364
1
16
i write a lot about the moon don’t i lol

Her Words
fallenshadow Gifted Writer
4 years ago
159
1
7
I don't know. I let words flow. I believe I'm writing this to someone, but maybe she won't understand that I'm talking to her.

Walk Away
photographygirl Bronze Comma
3 years ago
159
1
8
ahh! i finally posted!!

stumbling for success
neutralfleur Gifted Writer
3 years ago
150
1
12
lately i've been walking a path littered with stones.

when i find . . .
firestarwarrior Frequent Reader
4 months ago
111
0
2
till peace comes...

I'm done with poetry.
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
103
2
8
Sorry for the clickbait-y title, but... this is important.

Something ToWonder What If...
pastel_dreamer Gifted Writer
10 months ago
100
0
1
A hopefully inspirational speech that will make people question reality lol I doubt anyone will understand a word 😂

I Can Run
synthaspide Commaful Star
2 years ago
83
0
3
Something short for tonight. :))

New Life
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
3 years ago
82
0
2
I'll begin a new life.

Sinfully Skilled
nocturnal Gifted Writer
3 years ago
79
1
6
I wrote this on Saturday and did some heavy revisions to it today. It's meant to be read like a soliloquy of someone arguing with another person that isn't really listening. Hope you enjoy!!

baudelaire
drastichange Gifted Writer
10 months ago
79
1
0
VERSE 1:roaring sounds,a dainty microphone was all I ever wanted when I was so small

Thorns.
poopwarrior Silver Comma
4 years ago
72
0
4
Pricked, didn't bleed.

Changing
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
66
0
5
A poem

Unattainable Perfection
bees Silver Comma
a year ago
68
0
10
A short poem, in my life's reflection you are looking back at me...

It’s good, its hope
bvmbi Commabassador
3 years ago
66
2
4
something about trying again

Trying To Draw Realistic
saiipaii Gifted Writer
2 years ago
65
0
3
Just a few sketches that I did to test my art...

another mistake
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
62
0
8
a regretful poem

I'm trying my best
inspiredbylife Silver Comma
4 months ago
68
0
5
@blamkett, @doctorlove, @_moonchild_, @allison01_, @empathiser // I can't look you in the eye, those painful attacks you orchestrated beating me inside

Rain
kaylynn Commaful Star
5 years ago
56
0
24
I was spiraling out of control. My sanity was slipping. My humanity...evaporating. Until I saw you. And you saved me. For a brief moment. But a moment nonetheless.

i knew nothing
storm_ Avid Reader
8 months ago
458
5
57
and that was the best part

hold me like the moon
hymn Gold Comma
7 months ago
364
1
16
i write a lot about the moon don’t i lol

Her Words
fallenshadow Gifted Writer
4 years ago
159
1
7
I don't know. I let words flow. I believe I'm writing this to someone, but maybe she won't understand that I'm talking to her.

Walk Away
photographygirl Bronze Comma
3 years ago
159
1
8
ahh! i finally posted!!

stumbling for success
neutralfleur Gifted Writer
3 years ago
150
1
12
lately i've been walking a path littered with stones.

when i find . . .
firestarwarrior Frequent Reader
4 months ago
111
0
2
till peace comes...

I'm done with poetry.
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
103
2
8
Sorry for the clickbait-y title, but... this is important.

Something ToWonder What If...
pastel_dreamer Gifted Writer
10 months ago
100
0
1
A hopefully inspirational speech that will make people question reality lol I doubt anyone will understand a word 😂

I Can Run
synthaspide Commaful Star
2 years ago
83
0
3
Something short for tonight. :))

New Life
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
3 years ago
82
0
2
I'll begin a new life.

Sinfully Skilled
nocturnal Gifted Writer
3 years ago
79
1
6
I wrote this on Saturday and did some heavy revisions to it today. It's meant to be read like a soliloquy of someone arguing with another person that isn't really listening. Hope you enjoy!!

baudelaire
drastichange Gifted Writer
10 months ago
79
1
0
VERSE 1:roaring sounds,a dainty microphone was all I ever wanted when I was so small

Thorns.
poopwarrior Silver Comma
4 years ago
72
0
4
Pricked, didn't bleed.

Changing
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
66
0
5
A poem

Unattainable Perfection
bees Silver Comma
a year ago
68
0
10
A short poem, in my life's reflection you are looking back at me...

It’s good, its hope
bvmbi Commabassador
3 years ago
66
2
4
something about trying again

Trying To Draw Realistic
saiipaii Gifted Writer
2 years ago
65
0
3
Just a few sketches that I did to test my art...

another mistake
pro_crastinate Commaful Star
a year ago
62
0
8
a regretful poem

I'm trying my best
inspiredbylife Silver Comma
4 months ago
68
0
5
@blamkett, @doctorlove, @_moonchild_, @allison01_, @empathiser // I can't look you in the eye, those painful attacks you orchestrated beating me inside

Rain
kaylynn Commaful Star
5 years ago
56
0
24
I was spiraling out of control. My sanity was slipping. My humanity...evaporating. Until I saw you. And you saved me. For a brief moment. But a moment nonetheless.