Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,
It'll take ten seconds to read this, so just humor me, kay?
How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...
This deals with my dad's recent death in a sudden accident. This is my first poem and it's kinda therapy for me. I wanted to see if it was any good or whether it's embarrassing. Any feedback would be ...
Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!
I don’t even know if this makes any sense but please comment feedback:)
Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now.
How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...
I can’t find the words to describe how I feel and that is beyond frustrating.
She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”
Behind the doll with ocean blue eyes with rosy pink cheeks...
Fun fact: I took the pictures in the background
Little tomato separated from the vine. Little tomato says he's doing just fine.
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of...
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Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...
Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,
It'll take ten seconds to read this, so just humor me, kay?
How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...
This deals with my dad's recent death in a sudden accident. This is my first poem and it's kinda therapy for me. I wanted to see if it was any good or whether it's embarrassing. Any feedback would be ...
Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!
I don’t even know if this makes any sense but please comment feedback:)
Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse
She Tries to Hard
Chap. 3 Sleep Deprived
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now.
How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...
I can’t find the words to describe how I feel and that is beyond frustrating.
She Tries To Hard is going to be a little “book” of poems I’ve written. Please read and give me any type of feedback to help me grow! This first chapter is called “Eager Artist”
Behind the doll with ocean blue eyes with rosy pink cheeks...
Fun fact: I took the pictures in the background
Little tomato separated from the vine. Little tomato says he's doing just fine.
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of...
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Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...