About a boy who say's those three words to her On my first time I caught some feelings I'm just learning poetry so don't hurt me!!!! Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? No because it is 60° outside and that’s far from summer weather
A short allegorical piece that signifies how we , as people, are at times no more than slaves to our own thoughts.
It is meant to open our eyes and to push us towards acting out against our inner fea... First Time are a Very Common Words Right?
Because Everyone of us has our First Time...
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First poem, weekend feelings. Any and all feedback is appreciated. Just a quick little story I thought of while I was in the grocery store the other day...This is a first draft.
**This is a poem I wrote while I was upset but I'd really love feedback on it. I'm trying to get more into writing***
**This is a poem I wrote while I was upset but I'd really love feedback on it. ... Literally my first poem. Had a need to express and share in an anonymous space. Am I talking about my love life or another issue? You decide. My personal take on Rick and Kate nicknaming their relationship. They are just too cute for words! Of Blood and Bones: My take on self-sacrificial love. A country artist has traveled hundreds of miles to Nashville to get her chance at fame, but an unexpected twist puts her moment in the fame’s spotlight on hold My first ever poem. It’s about me, and what love did to me. It’s not perfect, I know.