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Critic Short Stories

Here are the top Critic short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "mind", "idk what's wrong with me", and more.
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Cynical Critic
goldenphoenix Commaful Star
3 years ago
234
1
13
Another poem, I guess.

๏ผณ๏ฝ—๏ฝ๏ฝŽ ๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝŽ๏ฝ‡ -[๐€๐ง ๐„๐ฅ๐ž๐ ๏ฟฝ...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
a year ago
175
0
25
๐“˜๐“ฏ ๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“ฑ๐“ฝ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ผ๐“ฌ๐“ฎ๐“ท๐“ญ๐“ผ ๐“ฒ๐“ท ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ป ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฏ๐“ฎ, ๐“ฏ๐“ธ๐“ฐ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“ฝ๐“ธ ๐“ผ๐“ฎ๐“ฝ ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ฏ๐“ป๐“ฎ๐“ฎ ~@Aamii

Cast down the critic
rosarlei Commaful Star
4 years ago
90
0
4

Tears for tech
bernardtwindwil Gold Comma
6 years ago
89
2
8
We have remakes and non-stop SFX and have lost our literacy

Zest, more than lemonshavi...
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
5 years ago
65
0
11
For the challenge about #zest. This was hard and a weird word to focus on. Hope you like it.

Existence
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
4 years ago
31
0
0
We are vowed to the objectification ...

There is no me
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
28
0
3
Maybe there was never a "me" to begin with

As The Thought Of Not Thin...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
16
0
1
I see faceless people and meaningless objects, I see โ€œmyโ€ reflection

Fuck The Human' Bipolar Un...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
17
0
2

Perpetual Happiness DOESN'...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
15
0
2
What makes this life worth living it, is also what people fear the most.

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
7 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Another installment of Unc...
tylerknottgregs Verified
3 years ago
14
0
0

Comfort Zone
oscarmannpoetry
4 years ago
13
0
2
Get out of my head With your great expectations

Melancholic state of human...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
12
0
2
In our contemporary world the more a society is colourful, the more it's diving into an unseen gloominess

Imma cry๐Ÿ˜ญ:update!
kreativekassie Gifted Writer
5 months ago
11
0
1
Just a silly rant. Don't mind me.

-THE TRUTH IS A WEAPON-
enoch
6 years ago
8
0
0
If you could read my mind...

TheIgnorant
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
5
0
2
In a society where people are praised for their โ€œParrotyโ€ rather than โ€œAuthenticityโ€โ€ฆ The โ€œthoughtโ€ is deserted.

Untitled 8: Hey You! .... ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
4 years ago
4
0
0
Humans are complex ... It's hard for us to see the unseen side of one another, who they are, what they like, what they hate, what makes them happy, sad or hollow .... How all this can be relayed?

Love your mother, the most...
corthant
6 years ago
4
0
0

A critic of Vladimir Putin
historl
6 years ago
3
0
0

Cynical Critic
goldenphoenix Commaful Star
3 years ago
234
1
13
Another poem, I guess.

๏ผณ๏ฝ—๏ฝ๏ฝŽ ๏ผณ๏ฝ๏ฝŽ๏ฝ‡ -[๐€๐ง ๐„๐ฅ๐ž๐ ๏ฟฝ...
aamii_ Frequent Reader
a year ago
175
0
25
๐“˜๐“ฏ ๐“ท๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“ฑ๐“ฝ ๐“ญ๐“ฎ๐“ผ๐“ฌ๐“ฎ๐“ท๐“ญ๐“ผ ๐“ฒ๐“ท ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ป ๐“ต๐“ฒ๐“ฏ๐“ฎ, ๐“ฏ๐“ธ๐“ฐ ๐“ฒ๐“ผ ๐“ฝ๐“ธ ๐“ผ๐“ฎ๐“ฝ ๐”‚๐“ธ๐“พ ๐“ฏ๐“ป๐“ฎ๐“ฎ ~@Aamii

Cast down the critic
rosarlei Commaful Star
4 years ago
90
0
4

Tears for tech
bernardtwindwil Gold Comma
6 years ago
89
2
8
We have remakes and non-stop SFX and have lost our literacy

Zest, more than lemonshavi...
philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
5 years ago
65
0
11
For the challenge about #zest. This was hard and a weird word to focus on. Hope you like it.

Existence
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
4 years ago
31
0
0
We are vowed to the objectification ...

There is no me
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
28
0
3
Maybe there was never a "me" to begin with

As The Thought Of Not Thin...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
16
0
1
I see faceless people and meaningless objects, I see โ€œmyโ€ reflection

Fuck The Human' Bipolar Un...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
17
0
2

Perpetual Happiness DOESN'...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
15
0
2
What makes this life worth living it, is also what people fear the most.

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
7 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Another installment of Unc...
tylerknottgregs Verified
3 years ago
14
0
0

Comfort Zone
oscarmannpoetry
4 years ago
13
0
2
Get out of my head With your great expectations

Melancholic state of human...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
12
0
2
In our contemporary world the more a society is colourful, the more it's diving into an unseen gloominess

Imma cry๐Ÿ˜ญ:update!
kreativekassie Gifted Writer
5 months ago
11
0
1
Just a silly rant. Don't mind me.

-THE TRUTH IS A WEAPON-
enoch
6 years ago
8
0
0
If you could read my mind...

TheIgnorant
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
3 years ago
5
0
2
In a society where people are praised for their โ€œParrotyโ€ rather than โ€œAuthenticityโ€โ€ฆ The โ€œthoughtโ€ is deserted.

Untitled 8: Hey You! .... ...
untitlelogy Gifted Writer
4 years ago
4
0
0
Humans are complex ... It's hard for us to see the unseen side of one another, who they are, what they like, what they hate, what makes them happy, sad or hollow .... How all this can be relayed?

Love your mother, the most...
corthant
6 years ago
4
0
0

A critic of Vladimir Putin
historl
6 years ago
3
0
0