Short Stories featuring Feedback

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erammalik1234
erammalik1234 Power Reader Be happy with what you have

WOWWWW!!! 500 FOLLOWERS THANK YOU SOO soo MUCH GUYS

COMPLETED 500 FOLLOWERS

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pratanubanerjee
pratanubanerjee Power Reader 67 featured +718 followers

You Should Love Followers Like A Baby

Taking care of Commaful Just like a Baby

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pratanubanerjee
pratanubanerjee Power Reader 67 featured +718 followers

Sharing Comment and Feedback

Always share your feedback Like the post after reading!

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mochiboo2
mochiboo2 Gifted Writer Looking for constructive criticism

I Tried ibisPaint x

New app!

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pro_crastinate
pro_crastinate Commaful Star I idolize your idle eyes

I wrote a song!!!! :D

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kEKWt2HW1pww5A7bnYQHTx4OaxEJaRzX0pV6Jmo9Ims/edit?usp=sharing https://voca.ro/1f4rHbIWtoHB

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_daemon_
_daemon_ Commaful Star semi-hiatus

F r i e n d

Again, music inspired, but also real life inspired. The quoted segments are taken from FRND's song 'Friend'.

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madman
madman Where, What, When, Who, Why, How?

Fuck

Well fuck i'm just shit out of luck, with all this progression what's up with this depression. It just seems like regression,

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elleseng
elleseng Commaful Star I'm not freaking out. (my space)

looking for feedback on a poem?

It'll take ten seconds to read this, so just humor me, kay?

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pratanubanerjee
pratanubanerjee Power Reader 67 featured +718 followers

Thank You Friends for Sharing Your Opinion :)

Kaiwhite This was so nice and calming for some reason!

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madman
madman Where, What, When, Who, Why, How?

Emotions

How am I supposed to deal with all these emotions? Slowly coasting, costing me my sanity wishing for my mind to be at ease, all I seek is peace please. Whenever it rains I think of you the child I nev...

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jessie_yessie
jessie_yessie Beggining Writer Lookin for Feedback :^)

Dilapidated

Sort of long, but a poem about emotional abuse and the effects of it. Feedback is appreciated!

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jodiedavies
jodiedavies UC, New Zealand

Mum

The power of grief.

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herotheturtle
herotheturtle Bronze Comma Pretty words, sad stories.

Ten Minutes to Midnight

Rough draft of a story for my writing class. Feedback is greatly appreciated.

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makana
makana Silver Comma There isn't enough room for a descriptio

The Train - Chapter 5

Hi everyone! I hope you are having a great day. Please read the other chapters of my story and give feedback if you do not mind :) Thaaaaanks!

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laurenholder
laurenholder Community member

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express m...

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glitterbug
glitterbug Passionate about poetry 💕

Prisoner

I don’t even know if this makes any sense but please comment feedback:)

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diana_otaku39
diana_otaku39 ☕️Coffee Bean☕️

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

She Tries to Hard Chap. 4 Trapped Lighthouse

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