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Critique Short Stories

Here are the top Critique short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "day", "papercut", and more.
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Paper Love
stadarooni Commaful Star
6 years ago
177
1
17
A dark heart can still feel light.

What Can I Do to Improve M...
a_r_thomas Gifted Writer
a year ago
22
0
6
Just wanted to ask my readers what they want to see more (or less) of so I can provide the best kind of poems for them. Thank you all <3

Toxic Habits
miamoore Frequent Reader
2 years ago
16
0
1
This was a bit of poetry I wrote to get out of this sort of pity party mind space that comes with receiving critiques 😅 I'm so overdramatic

hope
lg123
3 years ago
14
0
0
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
7 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Literary Monster
drakdifena Bronze Comma
4 years ago
14
0
0
This is a poem about accepting harsh feedback and growing from it. If anyone else needs a little pick me up after some harsh feedback, this one's for you. Since I've been writing a lot lately, and put...

My First Piece of Writing
blairalexanderr
3 years ago
14
0
2
I am writing a book, a new take on a zombie story. I'd appreciate any feedback for the introduction to the book. Thank you :)

June
diana_otaku39
5 years ago
13
0
0
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of... ------ Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...

A Lust to be Awoken
alwaysinlight
5 years ago
13
0
3
A Lust to be Awoken (Short Story), By Dalma T Perkins She is in a very lustful relationship with a man that has her in the throws of passion. Or so she believes.

Pig Wrestling
stephanwhitmer
a year ago
4
0
0
From Albuquerque to the pig pen, we all need just a little wrestlin.

I wanted to use Commaful.T...
enlightencrayon
5 years ago
3
0
0
Just a small coment on why I won't or can't possibly post my stories here...

Walks
floatingdust
6 years ago
3
0
0
Critique needed on poem

I who was
hrejvia
6 years ago
2
0
0
Feedback please. Constructive criticism please.

The Speech
victori44363428
3 years ago
1
0
0
Generations of micro-aggressions, racism and pain are passed down to a young private school girl when she gets a taste, first hand, of what's to come living amongst the white aristocracy.

Puppets are Pretty Popular
johnn_johnsonn Frequent Reader
6 months ago
1
0
0
Being a Respectful Critique of GRRM's Systemic Thema

Lonely Outlet - Prologue
lonelyoutlet
4 years ago
1
0
5
In this small, northern town, the darkness overwhelms… The darkness permeates everything. This is a place where the sun never rises, the moon never falls... Source: https://www.lonelyoutlet.com/origi...

Party CLUB - 01
poppedpanda
4 years ago
0
0
A soon to be comic I'll make. Looking for critique on storyline. Trigger warning, potential gore, s**cide portrayed, etc... Test on this website, wanted to try this place out.

20% off Writing Courses
anon Gifted Writer
5 years ago
0
0
Relive your school days with our bestselling writing courses. Made for all genres, and for this month only, save 20%! https://writ.rs/courses

Paper Love
stadarooni Commaful Star
6 years ago
177
1
17
A dark heart can still feel light.

What Can I Do to Improve M...
a_r_thomas Gifted Writer
a year ago
22
0
6
Just wanted to ask my readers what they want to see more (or less) of so I can provide the best kind of poems for them. Thank you all <3

Toxic Habits
miamoore Frequent Reader
2 years ago
16
0
1
This was a bit of poetry I wrote to get out of this sort of pity party mind space that comes with receiving critiques 😅 I'm so overdramatic

hope
lg123
3 years ago
14
0
0
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!

Oh, Sweet Ocean.
meaningfulwords
7 years ago
14
1
6
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now. How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...

Literary Monster
drakdifena Bronze Comma
4 years ago
14
0
0
This is a poem about accepting harsh feedback and growing from it. If anyone else needs a little pick me up after some harsh feedback, this one's for you. Since I've been writing a lot lately, and put...

My First Piece of Writing
blairalexanderr
3 years ago
14
0
2
I am writing a book, a new take on a zombie story. I'd appreciate any feedback for the introduction to the book. Thank you :)

June
diana_otaku39
5 years ago
13
0
0
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of... ------ Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...

A Lust to be Awoken
alwaysinlight
5 years ago
13
0
3
A Lust to be Awoken (Short Story), By Dalma T Perkins She is in a very lustful relationship with a man that has her in the throws of passion. Or so she believes.

Pig Wrestling
stephanwhitmer
a year ago
4
0
0
From Albuquerque to the pig pen, we all need just a little wrestlin.

I wanted to use Commaful.T...
enlightencrayon
5 years ago
3
0
0
Just a small coment on why I won't or can't possibly post my stories here...

Walks
floatingdust
6 years ago
3
0
0
Critique needed on poem

I who was
hrejvia
6 years ago
2
0
0
Feedback please. Constructive criticism please.

The Speech
victori44363428
3 years ago
1
0
0
Generations of micro-aggressions, racism and pain are passed down to a young private school girl when she gets a taste, first hand, of what's to come living amongst the white aristocracy.

Puppets are Pretty Popular
johnn_johnsonn Frequent Reader
6 months ago
1
0
0
Being a Respectful Critique of GRRM's Systemic Thema

Lonely Outlet - Prologue
lonelyoutlet
4 years ago
1
0
5
In this small, northern town, the darkness overwhelms… The darkness permeates everything. This is a place where the sun never rises, the moon never falls... Source: https://www.lonelyoutlet.com/origi...

Party CLUB - 01
poppedpanda
4 years ago
0
0
A soon to be comic I'll make. Looking for critique on storyline. Trigger warning, potential gore, s**cide portrayed, etc... Test on this website, wanted to try this place out.

20% off Writing Courses
anon Gifted Writer
5 years ago
0
0
Relive your school days with our bestselling writing courses. Made for all genres, and for this month only, save 20%! https://writ.rs/courses