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Goldilocks and the Three Bears (Retelling)

And, there we go, 'Once upon a time, a girl in a forest of pine..' A Collaboration by me and @orcastogether, enjoy!! ๐Ÿ˜

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๐•€ ๐•๐•š๐•ง๐•–๐•• ๐• ๐•Ÿ๐•”๐•–...

โ€˜๐™ฐ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐šŠ๐š—๐š, ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐š ๐š’๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š› ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š–๐šŽ๐š•๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐šŠ๐š ๐šŠ๐šข, ๐šŠ๐š ๐šŠ๐šข ๐š๐š›๐š˜๐š– ๐š–๐šŽ.โ€™ ๐—” ๐—ฆ๐—˜๐—ฆ๐—ง๐—œ๐—ก๐—”. Retelling of Hades and Persephoneโ€™s forlorn love. โ€˜๏ฟฝ...

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carillon_twins Silver Comma Crafting words into worlds ๐Ÿƒ

๐“๐‡๐„ ๐Ž๐‹๐ƒ ๐†๐Ž๐ƒ๐’ ๐€๐‘๐„ ๐ƒ๐„๐€๐ƒ [๐™ณ๐™ฐ๐™ฝ๐™ณ๐™ด๐™ป๐™ธ๐™พ๐™ฝ ๐™ธ // ๐š๐™ด๐šƒ๐™พ๐™ป๐™ณ]

A retelling of โ€˜Dandelionโ€™, a previous piece of ours, based on Ray Bradburyโ€™s โ€˜Dandelion Wineโ€™. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ช๐˜ณ๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ด: ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ.

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carillon_twins Silver Comma Crafting words into worlds ๐Ÿƒ

๐’ฏ๐ป๐ธ ๐ฟ๐’œ๐’Ÿ๐’ด ๐’ช๐น ๐’ฏ๐ป๐ธ ๐ฟ๐’œ๐’ฆ๐ธ

๐€ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ฅ๐ค ๐›๐š๐ฅ๐ฅ๐š๐ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐ž๐ง ๐ข๐ง ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ฌ๐ž ๐ฆ๐ž๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ @๐ฌ๐ž๐œ๐ซ๐ž๐ญ_๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ ๐š๐ง๐ @๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ž๐ซ๐ช๐ฎ๐ž๐ž๐ง โ€˜๐ฌ โ€œ๐‘๐ข๐ฌ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐๐ž๐ฑ๐ญ ๐’๐ฎ๐ฉ๐ž๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ๐š๐ซโ€ ๐œ๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ž๐ญ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง ...

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๐•ƒ๐•–๐•˜๐•–๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐• ๐•— ๐•’ ๐•Š๐•ฆ๐•Ÿ ๐”ป๐•›๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•Ÿ

๐Ž๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ž๐ง๐ญ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐Ÿ๐จ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐Ÿ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐’๐ž๐š๐ฌ๐จ๐ง๐š๐ฅ ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐‚๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐š๐ฅ๐ฒ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐ข๐œ๐ฌ (๐’๐ฒ๐๐ง๐ž๐ฒ) - ๐’๐ก๐จ๐ซ๐ญ ๐’๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐‚๐š๐ญ๐ž๐ ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ โ€œ๐™ฐ๐š—๐š ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š—๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š› ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š—๐šœ๐š’๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ๐š, ๐šŠ ...

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carillon_twins Silver Comma Crafting words into worlds ๐Ÿƒ

๐™ธ๐™ฒ๐™ฐ๐š๐š„๐š‚ ๐™ต๐™ป๐™ธ๐™ด๐š‚

// pt. 1 of the duology: ๐˜๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜š๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ [๐Ž๐ƒ๐„; Sapphic stanzas] ๐˜ž๐˜ฉ๐˜บ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ต ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜บ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ๐˜บ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜ต๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ญ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ˆ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ดโ€™ ๐˜ฉ๐˜ถ๐˜ฃ๐˜ณ๏ฟฝ...

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๐™ธ๐™ฒ๐™ฐ๐š๐š„๐š‚ ๐™ต๐™ฐ๐™ป๐™ป๐š‚

// pt. 2 of the duology: ๐˜๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ด ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜š๐˜ถ๐˜ฏ [๐„๐‹๐„๐†๐˜; Sapphic stanzas] ๐˜ž๐˜ฉ๐˜บ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ต ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜บ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ๐˜บ ๐˜ฆ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜ด๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜จ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ง ๐˜ˆ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฐ๐˜ญ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜จ๐˜ณ๐˜ช๐˜ฆ๐˜ง ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ดโ€™ ๐˜ง๏ฟฝ...

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๐‘ป๐’‰๐’† ๐‘จ๐’๐’„๐’‰๐’†๐’Ž๐’Š๐’”๐’• ๐‘ป๐’‰๐’“๐’๐’–๐’ˆ๐’‰ ๐‘ป๐’‰๐’† ๐‘ณ๐’๐’๐’Œ๐’Š๐’๐’ˆ ๐‘ฎ๐’๐’‚๐’”๐’”

๐˜‹๐˜๐˜ˆ๐˜Ž๐˜•๐˜–๐˜š๐˜๐˜š: Gender Dysphoria ๐˜ˆ๐˜•๐˜›๐˜๐˜‹๐˜–๐˜›๐˜Œ: Love potion ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ A mirror poem to raise awareness and representation on transgendersโ€™ rights and self harm through fiction and fantasy ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ

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๐๐€๐‹๐‹๐€๐’, โ€˜๐๐‘๐€๐‚๐„ ๐˜๐Ž๐”๐‘ ๐’๐๐„๐€๐‘!

Of ๐‘จ๐’•๐’‰๐’†๐’๐’‚, goddess of ๐•จ๐•š๐•ค๐••๐• ๐•ž and ๐•œ๐•Ÿ๐• ๐•จ๐•๐•–๐••๐•˜๐•–. Of ๐‘ท๐’‚๐’๐’๐’‚๐’”, struck dead by ๐’๐’†๐’–๐’”โ€™s jealousy. โ€˜๐˜‰๐˜ฆ๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ถ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ ๐˜ข ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฆ ๐˜จ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ด๐˜ด ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ๐˜ฐ, ๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ฏ ๐˜ด๐˜ถ๐˜ง๐˜ง๐˜ฆ๐˜ณ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฎ๐˜ฐ...

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๐’ฏ๐’ฝ๐“Ž ๐ธ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐“‚๐“Ž, ๐’ฏ๐’ฝ๐“Ž ๐ฟ๐‘œ๐“‹๐‘’...

โ€œ๐˜Œ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฎ๐˜บ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ช๐˜ฏ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ, ๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฐ๐˜ต ๐˜ต๐˜ฐ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ฆ... ๐˜ ๐˜ค๐˜ข๐˜ณ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ฃ๐˜ถ๐˜ต ๐˜ง๐˜ฐ๐˜ณ ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜บ ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ.โ€ ๐š‚๐š๐šŠ๐š›-๐šŒ๐š›๐š˜๐šœ๐šœ๐šŽ๐š ๐š•๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šœ: an ๐‹๐†๐๐“๐+ tale of times, inspired by the enemies/love...

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๐Œ๐˜๐’๐“๐ˆ๐‚โ€™๐’ ๐ˆ๐Œ๐๐‘๐Ž๐Œ๐๐“๐”

๐™ฐ ๐Ÿฟ-๐šœ๐šข๐š•๐š•๐šŠ๐š‹๐š•๐šŽ๐š ๐š•๐š’๐š—๐šŽ๐šœ ๐™ฒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐šข๐šŠ๐š• ๐š˜๐š— ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐™ท๐šŽ๐š›๐š–๐š’๐š ๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐š“๐š˜๐š› ๐™ฐ๐š›๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š—๐šŠ, ๐š๐š˜๐š› @๐šŽ๐š—๐šŒ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š๐š’๐š—๐š” ๐šƒ๐šŠ๐š›๐š˜๐š ๐™ฒ๐š˜๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐šœ๐š๐š‹๐š˜๐š›๐šŠ๐š๐š’๏ฟฝ...

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carillon_twins Silver Comma Crafting words into worlds ๐Ÿƒ

๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ ๐’ฎ๐’ซ๐’œ๐‘… ๐’œ (๐ฟ๐’ช๐’ฑ๐ธ) ๐’ฏ๐’œ๐ฟ๐ธ: ...

๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ [๐‹๐†๐๐“๐+ ๐‚๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐ž๐ฌ๐ญ] ๐Ÿณ๏ธโ€๐ŸŒˆ Arise, chosen storytellers: chant of forgotten lands, mourn those star-crossed lovers, mould awareness on mind, body and soul. โœ’๏ธ๐šˆ๐š˜๐šž๐š› ๐š‹๐šŠ๐š๐š๐š•๐šŽ ๐š˜๏ฟฝ...

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ั‚ะฝe perฮนlั• oา“ greed: a ะผyั‚ะฝ (parั‚ 1)

A... myth retelling? :P I split it into 4 parts, because it's too long ๐Ÿ˜….

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๐๐Ž๐‚๐“๐”๐‘๐๐„ ๐ˆ๐ ๐–๐‘๐ˆ๐“๐ˆ๐๐† [๐™ณ๐™ฐ๐™ฝ๐™ณ๐™ด๐™ป๐™ธ๐™พ๐™ฝ ๐™ธ๐™ธ // ๐š๐™ด๐šƒ๐™พ๐™ป๐™ณ]

A retelling of โ€˜Dandelionโ€™, a previous piece of ours, based on Ray Bradburyโ€™s โ€˜Dandelion Wineโ€™. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ด๐˜ฆ๐˜ค๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ด: ๐˜ต๐˜ช๐˜ฎ๐˜ฆ. *๐€ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ž๐ซโ€™๐ฌ ๐ข...

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Fairytale Retelling Results

WE HAVE A TIE!!! AND IS THEREFORE IN NEED OF A TIEBREAKER!!!

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๐–•๐–—๐–Ž๐–“๐–ˆ๐–Š๐–˜๐–˜ ๐–‰๐–”๐–œ๐–“ ๐–† ๐–๐–”๐–‘๐–Š

[โš ๏ธLITTLE TIP: After having read the whole poem, read it ๐—ฏ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ธ๐˜„๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ฑ๐˜€ as well!] A Shakespearian sonnet written for @pxtrovabliss, lovely friend of ours and kind supporter. โ€œ๐™‹๐™ง๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™˜๐™š๐™จ๐™จ, ๐™ฉ...

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