My first villanelle. Give it a read. If I did any mistakes in composing it, mention them in the comments and I'll definitely do better next time. Hope you all like it.. :)
CoMixed from @fallen_stardust: hope you don't mind. https://commaful.com/play/fallen_stardust/nubivagant/
Let me know how felt about the poem. Hope y'all liked it.
Many years have gone by since Earth had been scorched by the growing Sun, and humans colonized other planets, and now an intelligent robot records the present moment.
My first villanelle. Give it a read. If I did any mistakes in composing it, mention them in the comments and I'll definitely do better next time. Hope you all like it.. :)
CoMixed from @fallen_stardust: hope you don't mind. https://commaful.com/play/fallen_stardust/nubivagant/
Let me know how felt about the poem. Hope y'all liked it.
Many years have gone by since Earth had been scorched by the growing Sun, and humans colonized other planets, and now an intelligent robot records the present moment.