A dark heart can still feel light.
Just wanted to ask my readers what they want to see more (or less) of so I can provide the best kind of poems for them. Thank you all <3
This was a bit of poetry I wrote to get out of this sort of pity party mind space that comes with receiving critiques 😅 I'm so overdramatic
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now.
How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...
This is a poem about accepting harsh feedback and growing from it. If anyone else needs a little pick me up after some harsh feedback, this one's for you. Since I've been writing a lot lately, and put...
I am writing a book, a new take on a zombie story. I'd appreciate any feedback for the introduction to the book. Thank you :)
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of...
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Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...
A Lust to be Awoken (Short Story), By Dalma T Perkins
She is in a very lustful relationship with a man that has her in the throws of passion. Or so she believes.
From Albuquerque to the pig pen, we all need just a little wrestlin.
Just a small coment on why I won't or can't possibly post my stories here...
Generations of micro-aggressions, racism and pain are passed down to a young private school girl when she gets a taste, first hand, of what's to come living amongst the white aristocracy.
Being a Respectful Critique of GRRM's Systemic Thema
In this small, northern town, the darkness overwhelms… The darkness permeates everything. This is a place where the sun never rises, the moon never falls...
Source: https://www.lonelyoutlet.com/origi...
A soon to be comic I'll make. Looking for critique on storyline. Trigger warning, potential gore, s**cide portrayed, etc... Test on this website, wanted to try this place out.
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Just wanted to ask my readers what they want to see more (or less) of so I can provide the best kind of poems for them. Thank you all <3
This was a bit of poetry I wrote to get out of this sort of pity party mind space that comes with receiving critiques 😅 I'm so overdramatic
looking for feedback on my first poem. It is a bit all over the place but I do appreciate criticism!
I'm drowning, the waves crash over me. The waves are taking me under. The current is too strong right now.
How do I beat it? I can tread the water, I can swim in this storm but it's pulling me under...
This is a poem about accepting harsh feedback and growing from it. If anyone else needs a little pick me up after some harsh feedback, this one's for you. Since I've been writing a lot lately, and put...
I am writing a book, a new take on a zombie story. I'd appreciate any feedback for the introduction to the book. Thank you :)
June was the month of friendship. July was the month of...
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Hello hope you like this poem. Id appreciate feedback! What parts were good, which can improve or even suggestions on what to change. ...
A Lust to be Awoken (Short Story), By Dalma T Perkins
She is in a very lustful relationship with a man that has her in the throws of passion. Or so she believes.
From Albuquerque to the pig pen, we all need just a little wrestlin.
Just a small coment on why I won't or can't possibly post my stories here...
Generations of micro-aggressions, racism and pain are passed down to a young private school girl when she gets a taste, first hand, of what's to come living amongst the white aristocracy.
Being a Respectful Critique of GRRM's Systemic Thema
In this small, northern town, the darkness overwhelms… The darkness permeates everything. This is a place where the sun never rises, the moon never falls...
Source: https://www.lonelyoutlet.com/origi...
A soon to be comic I'll make. Looking for critique on storyline. Trigger warning, potential gore, s**cide portrayed, etc... Test on this website, wanted to try this place out.
Relive your school days with our bestselling writing courses. Made for all genres, and for this month only, save 20%! https://writ.rs/courses