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Trying Poetry

Here are some Trying poems on Commaful, including titles such as "Walk Away."
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Walk Away
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
159
1
8
ahh! i finally posted!!

stumbling for success
neutralfleur Gifted Writer
5 years ago
151
1
12
lately i've been walking a path littered with stones.

Sinfully Skilled
nocturnal Gifted Writer
5 years ago
79
1
6
I wrote this on Saturday and did some heavy revisions to it today. It's meant to be read like a soliloquy of someone arguing with another person that isn't really listening. Hope you enjoy!!

Thorns.
poopwarrior Silver Comma
6 years ago
72
0
4
Pricked, didn't bleed.

sorry
latejune Silver Comma
6 years ago
44
0
9
i'm sorry, that i can't help you.

Her life’s Music
duskthoughts Gifted Writer
6 years ago
39
0
2
Her song plays on a violin The struggles of a women trying to heal.

◔̯◔
lazarus Gifted Writer
5 years ago
28
0
1
haikaomoji about fear

My forever scarf
cuculater Gifted Writer
6 years ago
19
0
6
The purple curtains in my childhood-room: My forever scarf

The Race
lizziebevis Gifted Writer
6 years ago
17
0
2
So, here is another poem that you can read in reverse. This poem is all about the mental determination finishing and preserving through a race. I hope that you enjoy reading it.

I should know better
cartoonman Gifted Writer
6 years ago
14
0
1
I really should, but then again...

Ambition
boredacethetic
6 years ago
12
0
1
Oh, Icarus! How well you flew!

I do not fit
nicpunk
7 years ago
12
0
0

One more cookie
lost Bronze Comma
7 years ago
11
0
2
There's a fine line between hope and denial.

i am trying
asesari Bronze Comma
8 years ago
10
0
2
i don't know what i write most of the time but i keep writing, i think that's the whole point

Ignis Aurum Probat
papercut Bronze Comma
7 years ago
8
0
3
For tomorrow, for today . Ignis Aurum Probat ( Fire tempers gold)

Comes Apart
papercut Bronze Comma
7 years ago
7
0
2
For those who try hard and harder everyday.

I have never
cartoonman Gifted Writer
6 years ago
5
0
2
I try. I fail but I try

I refuse to be meanno matt...
arealmoment
5 years ago
2
0
1
uneven.

Untitled
anon Gifted Writer
7 years ago
0
0
Prediction text haiku (got the idea from Facebook) 1.I’m so excitedto see if I told you but you can see the devil.2.That’s what I keep hearingabout this acceptance.To find some way home.3. Yes, but I’...

Walk Away
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
159
1
8
ahh! i finally posted!!

stumbling for success
neutralfleur Gifted Writer
5 years ago
151
1
12
lately i've been walking a path littered with stones.

Sinfully Skilled
nocturnal Gifted Writer
5 years ago
79
1
6
I wrote this on Saturday and did some heavy revisions to it today. It's meant to be read like a soliloquy of someone arguing with another person that isn't really listening. Hope you enjoy!!

Thorns.
poopwarrior Silver Comma
6 years ago
72
0
4
Pricked, didn't bleed.

sorry
latejune Silver Comma
6 years ago
44
0
9
i'm sorry, that i can't help you.

Her life’s Music
duskthoughts Gifted Writer
6 years ago
39
0
2
Her song plays on a violin The struggles of a women trying to heal.

◔̯◔
lazarus Gifted Writer
5 years ago
28
0
1
haikaomoji about fear

My forever scarf
cuculater Gifted Writer
6 years ago
19
0
6
The purple curtains in my childhood-room: My forever scarf

The Race
lizziebevis Gifted Writer
6 years ago
17
0
2
So, here is another poem that you can read in reverse. This poem is all about the mental determination finishing and preserving through a race. I hope that you enjoy reading it.

I should know better
cartoonman Gifted Writer
6 years ago
14
0
1
I really should, but then again...

Ambition
boredacethetic
6 years ago
12
0
1
Oh, Icarus! How well you flew!

I do not fit
nicpunk
7 years ago
12
0
0

One more cookie
lost Bronze Comma
7 years ago
11
0
2
There's a fine line between hope and denial.

i am trying
asesari Bronze Comma
8 years ago
10
0
2
i don't know what i write most of the time but i keep writing, i think that's the whole point

Ignis Aurum Probat
papercut Bronze Comma
7 years ago
8
0
3
For tomorrow, for today . Ignis Aurum Probat ( Fire tempers gold)

Comes Apart
papercut Bronze Comma
7 years ago
7
0
2
For those who try hard and harder everyday.

I have never
cartoonman Gifted Writer
6 years ago
5
0
2
I try. I fail but I try

I refuse to be meanno matt...
arealmoment
5 years ago
2
0
1
uneven.

Untitled
anon Gifted Writer
7 years ago
0
0
Prediction text haiku (got the idea from Facebook) 1.I’m so excitedto see if I told you but you can see the devil.2.That’s what I keep hearingabout this acceptance.To find some way home.3. Yes, but I’...