Emery

@emery_iller

Writing to improve, feedback encouraged


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Emery . 2 years ago
Omophagia
A romance poem that's not about romance. Or about the death of one, or something like that. Comments and criticism always encouraged.
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Emery . 2 years ago
Prey.
Thank you for reading! Critiques and advice are always welcome. I write with the intent to improve.
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Emery . 3 years ago
The Silk Moth
Comments, advice, and critcism is always encouraged.
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Emery . 3 years ago
Transformation
Comments and criticism always encouraged.
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Emery . 3 years ago
Burn
Hi. I'm back. Criticism not just welcome, it's requested and encouraged.
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Emery . 5 years ago
So, I've been technically dead on this account recently, but I did collab on this along with tons of other amazing poets on this platform. Please check it out, there are a ton of talented people who h... Read More
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Stadarooni's Collaborations . 5 years ago
Perchance to Dream
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Emery . 5 years ago
The Old Stream
A short-ish poem.
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Emery . 5 years ago
A Haiku for Perfectionists and Procrastinators
A very true haiku.
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Emery . 5 years ago
Ode to the Hippo
I felt divinely inspired today, what more can I say?
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Emery . 5 years ago
They Wrote to One
Some things last forever, and some things pass in trends. Immortal ideas unite people, and ideas that unite people are immortal. That being said, the opposite is equally true. As always, advice and cr...
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Emery . 5 years ago
The Traveler
A poem about people and things that go away from you. As always critiques and advice are welcome.
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Emery . 5 years ago
To Mandy
I put down my cat Mandy today. I loved her dearly, and I thank her for every one of the 15 years of our friendship. I'd never known a creature so loyal and so wholly good. This is a poem I wrote a few...
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Emery . 5 years ago
Hatred
Another short poem. This one is a haiku.
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Emery . 5 years ago
One Day, or Never
A quick tanka. I had an idea in my head and I wanted to get it out. Maybe I'll write something better about a similar topic in time.
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Emery . 5 years ago
Paradise
A quick poem.
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Emery . 5 years ago
Lawnmower
This is a strange poem, it's not what I normally write. I've been working on a much longer poem, one that's more akin to an epic poem, so that's been taking up most of my time. Ironically, despite ho...
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Emery . 5 years ago
A Tanka about Tankas
I'll be honest, I got bored.
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Emery . 5 years ago
Final Summer
A first attempt at dabbling in iambic pentameter. *Note: This is re-published from yesterday since it was first published during a time when Commaful was glitting. As always, I'd be very appreciati...
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Emery . 5 years ago
Witch's House
I don't know what's inside that house, but someone does.
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Emery . 5 years ago
Sunshine State
I'm not sure if I like this poem, but I like the imagery. It's my first attempt at actually falling outside of free-verse, at least kind of.
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