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Unedited Short Stories

Here are the top Unedited short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "short poem", "shortpoem", and more.
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My message for you
cloudink
3 years ago
28
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1
A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!

The Heir and the Healer - ...
little_wintry
2 years ago
27
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The Heir wakes for a second time, and finds that she's not in any danger - rather, she's being helped by an unfamiliar woman.

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
26
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0
*WARNING: Abuse Mentions* As Deva takes off Rin's bandages, she learns a dark truth about Rin's upbringing.

Past Tense Truths
reasonsofbeing Bronze Comma
2 years ago
23
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0
an unedited plea to the corpse of the man I once loved. heartbreak, healing, and self-love, three years later.

Five Senses
maple_leaf
3 years ago
1
0
0
An insomnia/heatwave fueled piece of honesty :)

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
13
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0
Rin decides to stay in Deva's company, but Deva must first convince the village's leader that Rin means no harm.

Do you feel broken? When m...
writinchinchila
3 years ago
4
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0
Broken~ Written to fit with two characters from one of my books.

High
kayjohnstone Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
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0
It’s pretty raw and untouched… but I want it outta my drafts

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
15
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0
Rin admits something that catches Deva off guard.

My Demons
anon Gifted Writer
3 years ago
1
0
1
A quick, un-edited, real life short story about what it's like for some people to have anxiety PS. pls don't judge lol I didn't edit it but I really just wanted to get it down on paper

The Heir and the Healer - ...
little_wintry
2 years ago
0
0
Thousands of years after Deva's death, the new god of the underworld runs into a strange spirit (Also, I lied saying Part 10 was the last part. Whoopsie).

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
2
0
0
Rin comes back to find everything gone, and the person responsible for it. I had to cut some of this down for length reasons, since I didn't want to split it.

Sagepaw's PromiseChapter1
lucky_tulip
4 years ago
3
0
0
Sagepelt makes a promise to Starclan. But that doesn't mean he'll be able to keep it.

Painful Compassion
little_wintry
2 years ago
1
0
0
A real spur-of-the-moment, flow of consciousness poem regarding an old friend.

Alone in the dark?
lukehunter
2 years ago
2
0
0
A man in a dungeon gets a visitor [abstract/conciousness]

Yet the World Spins On
rabbit
4 years ago
0
0
I honestly can't tell if this is good or not, but I wanted to try something new. Tw; blood

Sagepaw's PromiseChapter 2
lucky_tulip
3 years ago
0
0
Sagepelt makes a promise to Starclan. But that doesn't mean he'll be able to keep it.

The Heir and the Healer Pa...
little_wintry
2 years ago
0
1
As Rin and Deva have their first 'date', Rin learns just how confusing romantic feelings are. *Note: A pretty big break in tone for the others. I wanted to write something cute and fluffy today ;)*

Precious Gifts
just.grass
5 years ago
8
0
0
This is something I wrote when I was 15. Be aware that these are thoughts and feelings that I was going through at the time as well as now. Enjoy!

Mythos - Dionysus and Mida...
little_wintry
2 years ago
2
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0
A small snippet from a collaboration my friend and I are working on. The Dionysus and Midas plotline focuses on a reincarnated Midas - now Cassidy Jones - coming to terms with the fact that many myths...

My message for you
cloudink
3 years ago
28
0
1
A short poem about a one sided connection. Constructive criticism is welcomed!!

The Heir and the Healer - ...
little_wintry
2 years ago
27
0
0
The Heir wakes for a second time, and finds that she's not in any danger - rather, she's being helped by an unfamiliar woman.

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
26
0
0
*WARNING: Abuse Mentions* As Deva takes off Rin's bandages, she learns a dark truth about Rin's upbringing.

Past Tense Truths
reasonsofbeing Bronze Comma
2 years ago
23
0
0
an unedited plea to the corpse of the man I once loved. heartbreak, healing, and self-love, three years later.

Five Senses
maple_leaf
3 years ago
1
0
0
An insomnia/heatwave fueled piece of honesty :)

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
13
0
0
Rin decides to stay in Deva's company, but Deva must first convince the village's leader that Rin means no harm.

Do you feel broken? When m...
writinchinchila
3 years ago
4
0
0
Broken~ Written to fit with two characters from one of my books.

High
kayjohnstone Gifted Writer
a year ago
16
0
0
It’s pretty raw and untouched… but I want it outta my drafts

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
15
0
0
Rin admits something that catches Deva off guard.

My Demons
anon Gifted Writer
3 years ago
1
0
1
A quick, un-edited, real life short story about what it's like for some people to have anxiety PS. pls don't judge lol I didn't edit it but I really just wanted to get it down on paper

The Heir and the Healer - ...
little_wintry
2 years ago
0
0
Thousands of years after Deva's death, the new god of the underworld runs into a strange spirit (Also, I lied saying Part 10 was the last part. Whoopsie).

The Heir and the Healer, P...
little_wintry
2 years ago
2
0
0
Rin comes back to find everything gone, and the person responsible for it. I had to cut some of this down for length reasons, since I didn't want to split it.

Sagepaw's PromiseChapter1
lucky_tulip
4 years ago
3
0
0
Sagepelt makes a promise to Starclan. But that doesn't mean he'll be able to keep it.

Painful Compassion
little_wintry
2 years ago
1
0
0
A real spur-of-the-moment, flow of consciousness poem regarding an old friend.

Alone in the dark?
lukehunter
2 years ago
2
0
0
A man in a dungeon gets a visitor [abstract/conciousness]

Yet the World Spins On
rabbit
4 years ago
0
0
I honestly can't tell if this is good or not, but I wanted to try something new. Tw; blood

Sagepaw's PromiseChapter 2
lucky_tulip
3 years ago
0
0
Sagepelt makes a promise to Starclan. But that doesn't mean he'll be able to keep it.

The Heir and the Healer Pa...
little_wintry
2 years ago
0
1
As Rin and Deva have their first 'date', Rin learns just how confusing romantic feelings are. *Note: A pretty big break in tone for the others. I wanted to write something cute and fluffy today ;)*

Precious Gifts
just.grass
5 years ago
8
0
0
This is something I wrote when I was 15. Be aware that these are thoughts and feelings that I was going through at the time as well as now. Enjoy!

Mythos - Dionysus and Mida...
little_wintry
2 years ago
2
0
0
A small snippet from a collaboration my friend and I are working on. The Dionysus and Midas plotline focuses on a reincarnated Midas - now Cassidy Jones - coming to terms with the fact that many myths...