Incoherent rant. It rhymes but doesn't really fit . Unbalanced lines.
Advice on grammatical errors is welcome as always (there might be too many of those errors in here).
As the poem might pose me to... an excerpt from a tormented night Winter snow ❄️- losing one can be hard and the process can be very sad and lonely so here goes my idea or metaphor of loss Thoughts of Alter Ego towards self. i’m so afraid i’ve already ruined you. Thoughts I layed on paper listening to witch house music in a chaotic library. for the one who I wish I never met
for the one I risked my heart for because grey,cloudy skies are how most days go. This boy really really hates the sun. I don't know where all this came from exactly. To me this was nothing but pouring pure emotion onto paper; etc... Your perception is believable. Sometimes it's hard to live in this world and live up to these new expectations... how an agitated mind wear out and slowly finds peace Wrote it out of boredom, thought I would share it.
it's dark... very dark... cold.. lonely.. silent.. but loud... what is it..?