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Suspenseful Short Stories

Here are the top Suspenseful short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "halloween", "thriller", and more.
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A Stranger's Hell
ivoryannalise Commabassador
a year ago
130
1
10
A poem about a manipulative serial killer talking to his newest charge. Inspired by "Strangers From Hell."

Homework Simulator
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
9 months ago
50
0
6
A dude has some fun with his teacher, but not in the way you think.

Why can't I? ---------- Ch...
tennis_in_hell Gifted Writer
2 years ago
18
0
0
Now she knows she's not alone, but who is it?

Costly Taxi part 1
spookybookwrite
a year ago
22
0
2
"Ugh, I never have service anywhere in this city." Caleb uttered in a frustrated tone as he flicked the top corner of his phone. It was getting late and he needed to call an Uber home but, at the mome...

When The Ocean Falls by D....
daniellewis
7 months ago
13
0
0
He's fading - the hare is descending into the chilling depths of the ocean. His eyes are crying - his tears are pale gold - the emptiness is creeping in.

The Encounter
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
a year ago
41
0
5
A gynoid enters a space bar, where the bartender proceeds to insult her. Contains sexual harassment and slight language. This one is longer than my others, but it's still short.

yellow madness - level one...
twitchy_ramirez
7 months ago
2
0
0
spencer has suddenly no clipped into the backrooms, and there is something in there with him.

Costly Taxi part 2
spookybookwrite
a year ago
2
0
0
The next morning Caleb awoke feeling like absolute death. His skin was painful at the touch and his headache was pounding in his ears. Cursing himself for staying out so late on a weeknight he checked...

Reunion (TINALS Part 3)
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
2
The next chapter of 'This is Not a Love Story'. Zoe questions Kiki's disappearance; Meanwhile, Hunter learns to use his feet. You know the drill, folks. Rated M.

Upon The Broken Hands, The...
daniellewis
7 months ago
14
0
0
He wept gray tears in his anguish. All the crossings he traversed across have dissipated into nothing. His psyche is a vessel of brittleness. Throughout his tear-filled eyes, the crow's feather swirls...

Time
savannahworks
2 years ago
14
1
1
It was the year 2102, Liz was finally graduating alongside Frankie, her best friend. All seem to be normal, until disturbances are being detected worldwide and people start disappearing without a trac...

Silence without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
6 months ago
16
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

Kain - Ravenhead
ckcorax
2 years ago
0
0
They ride North up the river Knoelle in ships vast and eldrich, drawn and composed of what little trees weren't totally lost to the Blight.

The Legend of I
dlores
3 years ago
13
0
1
This the poetry version of my narrative.

Chains On The Rabbit, The ...
daniellewis
7 months ago
13
0
0
His snowshoe paws are encased in chains as he hops on his hind legs. On his forehead was placed a wreath of thorns, crimson and blasphemous it was.

Silence Without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
6 months ago
15
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

Silence Without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
5 months ago
12
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

The Letters Of Nowhere And...
daniellewis
7 months ago
14
0
0
"We don't blame ourselves for being here, would you say so? After all, you created us so that we could exist." A frail, thin, skeleton-like red cottontail rabbit placed the letter on his writing desk ...

sensory overload
karrotko
7 months ago
3
0
0
The ongoing stream of thinning liquid traversed through the road, branching out into tinier streams as it encountered more crevices in the asphalt. I stabbed the end of a shovel in one of the cracks, ...

In The Sea Of Loneliness, ...
daniellewis
6 months ago
1
0
0
In the sea of loneliness, while standing amidst a storm-tossed shoreline, I grasp within my paw, dead roots of a tree that does not belong to me - for it belonged to my heaviest burdens called sin.

A Stranger's Hell
ivoryannalise Commabassador
a year ago
130
1
10
A poem about a manipulative serial killer talking to his newest charge. Inspired by "Strangers From Hell."

Homework Simulator
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
9 months ago
50
0
6
A dude has some fun with his teacher, but not in the way you think.

Why can't I? ---------- Ch...
tennis_in_hell Gifted Writer
2 years ago
18
0
0
Now she knows she's not alone, but who is it?

Costly Taxi part 1
spookybookwrite
a year ago
22
0
2
"Ugh, I never have service anywhere in this city." Caleb uttered in a frustrated tone as he flicked the top corner of his phone. It was getting late and he needed to call an Uber home but, at the mome...

When The Ocean Falls by D....
daniellewis
7 months ago
13
0
0
He's fading - the hare is descending into the chilling depths of the ocean. His eyes are crying - his tears are pale gold - the emptiness is creeping in.

The Encounter
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
a year ago
41
0
5
A gynoid enters a space bar, where the bartender proceeds to insult her. Contains sexual harassment and slight language. This one is longer than my others, but it's still short.

yellow madness - level one...
twitchy_ramirez
7 months ago
2
0
0
spencer has suddenly no clipped into the backrooms, and there is something in there with him.

Costly Taxi part 2
spookybookwrite
a year ago
2
0
0
The next morning Caleb awoke feeling like absolute death. His skin was painful at the touch and his headache was pounding in his ears. Cursing himself for staying out so late on a weeknight he checked...

Reunion (TINALS Part 3)
imonthecomputer Gifted Writer
a year ago
24
0
2
The next chapter of 'This is Not a Love Story'. Zoe questions Kiki's disappearance; Meanwhile, Hunter learns to use his feet. You know the drill, folks. Rated M.

Upon The Broken Hands, The...
daniellewis
7 months ago
14
0
0
He wept gray tears in his anguish. All the crossings he traversed across have dissipated into nothing. His psyche is a vessel of brittleness. Throughout his tear-filled eyes, the crow's feather swirls...

Time
savannahworks
2 years ago
14
1
1
It was the year 2102, Liz was finally graduating alongside Frankie, her best friend. All seem to be normal, until disturbances are being detected worldwide and people start disappearing without a trac...

Silence without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
6 months ago
16
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

Kain - Ravenhead
ckcorax
2 years ago
0
0
They ride North up the river Knoelle in ships vast and eldrich, drawn and composed of what little trees weren't totally lost to the Blight.

The Legend of I
dlores
3 years ago
13
0
1
This the poetry version of my narrative.

Chains On The Rabbit, The ...
daniellewis
7 months ago
13
0
0
His snowshoe paws are encased in chains as he hops on his hind legs. On his forehead was placed a wreath of thorns, crimson and blasphemous it was.

Silence Without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
6 months ago
15
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

Silence Without the Key [1...
hyperiontheory
5 months ago
12
0
0
When three friends get dragged into a murder case, they must use their wits and their interlocking alias’s to stay alive.

The Letters Of Nowhere And...
daniellewis
7 months ago
14
0
0
"We don't blame ourselves for being here, would you say so? After all, you created us so that we could exist." A frail, thin, skeleton-like red cottontail rabbit placed the letter on his writing desk ...

sensory overload
karrotko
7 months ago
3
0
0
The ongoing stream of thinning liquid traversed through the road, branching out into tinier streams as it encountered more crevices in the asphalt. I stabbed the end of a shovel in one of the cracks, ...

In The Sea Of Loneliness, ...
daniellewis
6 months ago
1
0
0
In the sea of loneliness, while standing amidst a storm-tossed shoreline, I grasp within my paw, dead roots of a tree that does not belong to me - for it belonged to my heaviest burdens called sin.