Me? Posting on Commaful? Seems unlikely. I've been working on developing my lyric poetry style recently and would love feedback. This one was written to have a satisfying flow when read aloud.
It had been well over a year since she'd been home but it didn't feel like home without her husband. She'd spent almost four months staying at a hotel to be closer to him in the hospital. Now the hous...
Me? Posting on Commaful? Seems unlikely. I've been working on developing my lyric poetry style recently and would love feedback. This one was written to have a satisfying flow when read aloud.
It had been well over a year since she'd been home but it didn't feel like home without her husband. She'd spent almost four months staying at a hotel to be closer to him in the hospital. Now the hous...