Short Stories featuring Immortal

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sstar2000
sstar2000 Gifted Writer BLACK LIVES MATTER โค๏ธ

The Rage of Heaven and Hell

Hush listen to them argue. The devil and the angel. Two povs of the same tale. A collection of A-Z Haikus each in the perspectives of an angel and the devil. Cheers to the amazing @ebugler34 who colla...

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carillon_twins
carillon_twins Silver Comma Crafting words into worlds ๐Ÿ–‹

๐“๐‡๐„ ๐Ž๐‹๐ƒ ๐†๐Ž๐ƒ๐’ ๐€๐‘๐„ ๐ƒ๐„๐€๐ƒ [๐™ณ๐™ฐ๐™ฝ๐™ณ๐™ด๐™ป๐™ธ๐™พ๐™ฝ ๐™ธ // ๐š๐™ด๐šƒ๐™พ๐™ป๐™ณ]

A retelling of โ€˜Dandelionโ€™, a previous piece of ours, based on Ray Bradburyโ€™s โ€˜Dandelion Wineโ€™. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ช๐˜ณ๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ด: ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ.

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wawa_lover
wawa_lover Silver Comma she/her~love is a complicated thing <3

Immortal Love

Prompt: Losing someone and finding them in the future

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mjkemp91
mjkemp91 Gifted Writer I like to create and inspire.

Prehensile.

Playing around with rhythm and rhyming.

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_daemon_
_daemon_ Commaful Star 'what I lost, someone found'

D i o n y s u s

A little something on the daily prompt โ€˜drinkโ€™

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raewalter
raewalter Power Reader a poet who reads a lot but writes little

๐•ƒ๐•’๐••๐•ช ๐•๐•–๐•ค๐•ฆ๐•ค

A poem about the monster in my mind. Definitely does not intend to demean any religion or God. Hope you like it!

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emmewritesart
emmewritesart Gifted Writer insta: @emmesymonepoetry

Ahogar by Emme Symone

On the heated pavement, came vows to live immortal.

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photographygirl
photographygirl Bronze Comma โœžโ„รฎฦง ฦ’รธะ˜โœž รฎฦง โ„‚รธรธโ„“

Love's Reality

comment and share with your friends :)

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photographygirl
photographygirl Bronze Comma โœžโ„รฎฦง ฦ’รธะ˜โœž รฎฦง โ„‚รธรธโ„“

Rhythms

your girl is back

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russetsong
russetsong Commaful Star break my heart? i'll break your bones.

I outlived my friends.

Twilight is about to rule Equestria, but Celestia admits the downside of living forever.

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_my_reflections
_my_reflections Gifted Writer Every line has a meaning more than words

My Soul.....

I am thinking about soul for years and this is what I found. Comment what you think about soul, for the poem has second round

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artizi
artizi Gifted Writer Every story creates a brand new universe

Endless

I'm endless, just like the universe around me.

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ofaliquis
ofaliquis https://ofaliquis.com

Class of 1922

All I can do is pray there won't be a seventy-fifth class reunion.

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itsace
itsace Gifted Writer Even tho I may act like it, I am not emo

Escaping my past

Didn't know what else to call it ยฏ\_(ใƒ„)_/ยฏ

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lester_w
lester_w Gifted Writer Your friendly neighborhood writerman

Over and Over by Lester W.

Would you love someone if it meant losing them time and time again? A story inspired by the song "Immortal" by Reinaeiry.

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starry_cosmos
starry_cosmos Gifted Writer ๐ŸŒ™ You are a star in our cosmos โญ

When You Become Immortal

I found an old poem I wrote a long time ago when I was reading a series about an immortal being. I forgot the title, but it really challenged my perspective about immortality. These were my thoughts! ...

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rwinabh
rwinabh Bronze Comma Just spilling ink to drain myself

The prisoner of time

A man whose love needed sacrifice to exist, ended up sacrificing more than he thought he would. He ended up sacrificing his expiration date.

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_my_reflections
_my_reflections Gifted Writer Every line has a meaning more than words

My soul ...... (Part-2)

This is what I have found about soul. Please read upto end. Share what you think about soul in comment. Also read it's first part

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atwojay
atwojay Gifted Writer Poet, lover, thinker, human.

To Stay Alive

Would you kill to stay alive if life would never reach an end?

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davies_aanuoluw
davies_aanuoluw Aspiring writer.......

Lord of the dead

I smell them before I see them. They smell like forgotten places,like The dead. Then I hear their wispers, those terrible wispering,like winds passing through deserted cemetery.

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