Playing around with rhythm and rhyming. A little something on the daily prompt
‘drink’ On the heated pavement, came vows to live immortal.
comment and share with your friends :) I found an old poem I wrote a long time ago when I was reading a series about an immortal being. I forgot the title, but it really challenged my perspective about immortality. These were my thoughts! ... Would you kill to stay alive if life would never reach an end? -sometimes immortality isn't the best, after all.
[thalia grace and the art of immortality] What had started as a regular boring, no electronics thank you very much for ruining my life, camping trip is about to change Madelaine and her life forever.
First, Madelaine suffers the grievous... Time lost its meaning when death lost its certainty. The fleeting memories of what was whittle away at the vessels of the immortal who yearn for the warmth of cause. A man whose love needed sacrifice to exist, ended up sacrificing more than he thought he would. He ended up sacrificing his expiration date. I hope it speaks for itself. Enjoy!
A cursed man with nothing to have nor anything to lose,
Yet one face enough to reminisce his memories of seemingly another life.
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