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Immortal Short Stories

Here are the top Immortal short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "dandelion wine", "ray bradbury", and more.
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๐“๐‡๐„ ๐Ž๐‹๐ƒ ๐†๐Ž๐ƒ๐’ ๐€๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
255
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A retelling of โ€˜Dandelionโ€™, a previous piece of ours, based on Ray Bradburyโ€™s โ€˜Dandelion Wineโ€™. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ช๐˜ณ๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ด: ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ.

The Rage of Heaven and Hel...
sstar2000 Gifted Writer
4 years ago
253
2
45
Hush listen to them argue. The devil and the angel. Two povs of the same tale. A collection of A-Z Haikus each in the perspectives of an angel and the devil. Cheers to the amazing @ebugler34 who colla...

s e e p
zehira Commabassador
2 years ago
198
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25
All it had was one bite to live a life she never want to have.

pretty like blood in snow
pokertrace Gifted Writer
2 months ago
135
1
15
i finally have my break, tommrowโ€™s the last day of school and IM FREE. well not of exams but those are next year heh.

๐“๐ก๐ž ๐ ๐ซ๐ข๐ฆ ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐ฉ๐ž...
annwrites14 Commaful Star
a year ago
126
0
10
This poem is about a boy burdened by loss and a girl tired of being feared; neither of them can die. I hope you enjoy this poem as much as I enjoyed writing it! :)

Till' the end of time.
butterfly_ Gifted Writer
a year ago
126
1
21
I put together a short poem for the daily prompt- Hope you like this <33

Prehensile.
mjkemp91 Gifted Writer
5 years ago
118
1
7
Playing around with rhythm and rhyming.

Immortal Love
wawa_lover Silver Comma
3 years ago
117
0
6
Prompt: Losing someone and finding them in the future

cartoon guns and their mel...
pokertrace Gifted Writer
2 months ago
117
1
13
just figured out that today's prompt is guns while I named this yesterday...commaful have you been spying on me??? (jk)

An IMMORTAL
romanticbloom1 Commaful Star
a year ago
94
0
8
To Kill A Zombie: I'm just a lonely soul, A Zombie Killer A Werewolf in Disguise. (An IMMORTAL)

Ahogarby Emme Symone
emmewritesart Gifted Writer
5 years ago
89
0
10
On the heated pavement, came vows to live immortal.

immortality.
notexactlyhuman Commaful Star
a year ago
80
0
12
anyone want to join me in immortality?

Love's Reality
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
78
0
2
comment and share with your friends :)

Zeus
hisho Commaful Star
2 years ago
76
0
4
The god of the gods

On the road!
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
57
0
2
New goal is set. We need to go now!

Rhythms
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
57
0
1
your girl is back

I outlived my friends.
musical_mutt Commaful Star
3 years ago
55
0
7
Twilight is about to rule Equestria, but Celestia admits the downside of living forever.

Show must go on!
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
55
0
0
In a dearing attack on the palace there is finally time to talk to her.

The moon
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
49
0
0
Two powerful beings wage war on each other creating a byproduct - the moons.

How I became a woman first...
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
47
0
0
A formation of the moon made something strange with him or should I say her?

๐“๐‡๐„ ๐Ž๐‹๐ƒ ๐†๐Ž๐ƒ๐’ ๐€๏ฟฝ...
carillon_twins Commaful Star
3 years ago
255
0
22
A retelling of โ€˜Dandelionโ€™, a previous piece of ours, based on Ray Bradburyโ€™s โ€˜Dandelion Wineโ€™. ๐˜›๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ ๐˜ง๐˜ช๐˜ณ๐˜ด๐˜ต ๐˜ธ๐˜ช๐˜ด๐˜ฉ ๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏ ๐˜ฅ๐˜ข๐˜ฏ๐˜ฅ๐˜ฆ๐˜ญ๐˜ช๐˜ฐ๐˜ฏโ€™๐˜ด ๐˜ฑ๐˜ฆ๐˜ต๐˜ข๐˜ญ๐˜ด: ๐˜ญ๐˜ฐ๐˜ท๐˜ฆ.

The Rage of Heaven and Hel...
sstar2000 Gifted Writer
4 years ago
253
2
45
Hush listen to them argue. The devil and the angel. Two povs of the same tale. A collection of A-Z Haikus each in the perspectives of an angel and the devil. Cheers to the amazing @ebugler34 who colla...

s e e p
zehira Commabassador
2 years ago
198
0
25
All it had was one bite to live a life she never want to have.

pretty like blood in snow
pokertrace Gifted Writer
2 months ago
135
1
15
i finally have my break, tommrowโ€™s the last day of school and IM FREE. well not of exams but those are next year heh.

๐“๐ก๐ž ๐ ๐ซ๐ข๐ฆ ๐ซ๐ž๐š๐ฉ๐ž...
annwrites14 Commaful Star
a year ago
126
0
10
This poem is about a boy burdened by loss and a girl tired of being feared; neither of them can die. I hope you enjoy this poem as much as I enjoyed writing it! :)

Till' the end of time.
butterfly_ Gifted Writer
a year ago
126
1
21
I put together a short poem for the daily prompt- Hope you like this <33

Prehensile.
mjkemp91 Gifted Writer
5 years ago
118
1
7
Playing around with rhythm and rhyming.

Immortal Love
wawa_lover Silver Comma
3 years ago
117
0
6
Prompt: Losing someone and finding them in the future

cartoon guns and their mel...
pokertrace Gifted Writer
2 months ago
117
1
13
just figured out that today's prompt is guns while I named this yesterday...commaful have you been spying on me??? (jk)

An IMMORTAL
romanticbloom1 Commaful Star
a year ago
94
0
8
To Kill A Zombie: I'm just a lonely soul, A Zombie Killer A Werewolf in Disguise. (An IMMORTAL)

Ahogarby Emme Symone
emmewritesart Gifted Writer
5 years ago
89
0
10
On the heated pavement, came vows to live immortal.

immortality.
notexactlyhuman Commaful Star
a year ago
80
0
12
anyone want to join me in immortality?

Love's Reality
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
78
0
2
comment and share with your friends :)

Zeus
hisho Commaful Star
2 years ago
76
0
4
The god of the gods

On the road!
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
57
0
2
New goal is set. We need to go now!

Rhythms
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
57
0
1
your girl is back

I outlived my friends.
musical_mutt Commaful Star
3 years ago
55
0
7
Twilight is about to rule Equestria, but Celestia admits the downside of living forever.

Show must go on!
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
55
0
0
In a dearing attack on the palace there is finally time to talk to her.

The moon
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
49
0
0
Two powerful beings wage war on each other creating a byproduct - the moons.

How I became a woman first...
amdsyc Gifted Writer
a year ago
47
0
0
A formation of the moon made something strange with him or should I say her?