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Critique Please Short Stories

Here are the top Critique Please short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "horror", "thriller", and more.
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WanderinginWo...
leocharlesm Gifted Writer
6 years ago
15
0
2

  • short story

  • critique please

  • engage

  • artsy-fartsy

  • life

    • Life is Wanderous.
    I sit here as the cool air...
    jonathonturoldo
    4 years ago
    2
    0
    0

  • cold

  • winter

  • michigan

  • newwriter

  • new writer

    • I’m describing winter as it starts to set in up here in the state of Michigan
    WanderinginWo...
    leocharlesm Gifted Writer
    6 years ago
    15
    0
    2

  • short story

  • critique please

  • engage

  • artsy-fartsy

  • life

    • Life is Wanderous.
    I sit here as the cool air...
    jonathonturoldo
    4 years ago
    2
    0
    0

  • cold

  • winter

  • michigan

  • newwriter

  • new writer

    • I’m describing winter as it starts to set in up here in the state of Michigan