Part 9: Something about Her












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Part 9 is out. On today's prompt "Lollypop"

Thank you to those who are sticking with me on this story ^^

Part 9: Something about Her

Hello!

He was no longer a Boy. But not a Man either.

He was no longer a Boy, But not a Man either. Part of him knew this was not real, and he struggled to stay grounded in reality

Something inside told him to let go, and visit that place once again.

And there he went, back to the day it all began...

Hi

They met at a festival.

They met at a festival. They got to know each other through a common friend.

They met at a festival. They got to know each other through a common friend. Soon after they were cuddled up in front of a lake, sharing stories.

Six months before he had a precognition. Someone special would come into his life.

She was due to come in precisely 6 months.

She was due to come in precisely 6 months. But he had forgotten about it.

She was due to come in precisely 6 months. But he had forgotten about it. He wasn't even looking for her.

It just happened.

He was in a good place at the time.

He was in a good place at the time. Everything came easily; he felt strong. Nothing ever got to him

He had grown soft and unaware, though.

He had grown soft and unaware, though. He felt unable to judge others

But his unwillingness to judge was not a sign of enlightenment.

it was the result of having become too easy going.

What is this feeling?

Despite of having already talked for hours, he had not entertained the idea of anything else happening between them.

He wasn't "looking"

And then it happened...

A woman approached them with two Lollypops and gave one two each.

A woman approached them with two Lollypops and gave one to each. She looked at them with dreamy eyes, and said:

"You two make a cute couple"

The girl looked up and gave the Boy a wide and innocent smile...

The girl looked up and gave the Boy a wide and innocent smile... ...and that was it.

no way...

shit...

shit...am I in love?

He felt the entire universe spinning around in her.

He felt the entire universe spinning around in her. He saw it...

But bliss was not meant to last

As soon as it happened, an overwhelming fear began to take over him.

He couldn't explain it at the time.

He couldn't explain it at the time. Why did he feel so worried?

He couldn't explain it at the time. Why did he feel so worried? Why did his entire attention suddenly shift to her?

One moment he was an island, the next, he was lost.

One moment he was an island, the next, he was lost. The feeling of impending dread never went away after that day.

As they got to know each other, he learned about her past.

As they got to know each other, he learned about her past. Every single thing he had felt, now had a correlating story...

...it was not in his head, he was feeling into her.

...it was not in his head, he was feeling into her. He realised he knew her demons better than she did...

The stories kept getting worse.

The stories kept getting worse. They haunted him.

But his hear had already made a decision.

But his hear had already made a decision. She was the one.

He decided to pull all the resources he had into one small box

every bit of love he had nurtured over the past three years.

every bit of love he had nurtured over the past three years. And gave it all away to try to help her.

He was aware his own life had lost all relevance.

He was aware his own life had lost all relevance. But he couldn't do anything.

A spell had been casted on him

He grew weaker by the day. An insecurity he had not known in a long time, began taking over him.

He wasn't concerned about the things that had happened to her...what she had done to herself.

What tortured him, day in and day out was a feeling...

What tortured him, day in and day out was a feeling...a feeling that bad things were to come.

Not to him, but to the person he now loved so deeply.

Not to him, but to the person he now loved so deeply. To him, she was not just a partner, but a best friend, a mother, a daughter...

He had never experienced all these type of love for a person simultaneously.

He told himself that he could not actually see into the future.

He told himself that he could not actually see into the future. That he was being insecure and paranoid...

But he was unable and unwilling to listen to his inner voice.

He had no idea the price to pay would be so high.

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