I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry
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laurenholder
laurenholder Community member
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Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time. I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express myself. Does anyone have any feedback? Thanks!

I am looking for some feedback, new to poetry

Hi, I am new to poetry and have just wrote this poem for the first time.

I don't really understand the rhythm and beats etc, but this is the general jist of the words I would like to use to express myself. Does anyone have any feedback? Thanks!

Oh darling,

familiar but forgotten

confession of the grave.

Drowning in silenced

devotion, disregarded soul

like a meandering river

craving the calm yet

yearning the chaos

of you.

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