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goldenphoenix
goldenphoenix There's no escape from the labyrinth.
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Another poem, I guess.

Cynical Critic

Criticize every word I write

Criticize every word I write Makes me question myself

Criticize every word I write Makes me question myself "This poem sucks, you'll never get it right."

Criticize every word I write Makes me question myself "This poem sucks, you'll never get it right." Put my ideas back on the shelf.

They compare me to others

They compare me to others People who have more talent than me

They compare me to others People who have more talent than me Throw one poem away, then another

They compare me to others People who have more talent than me Throw one poem away, then another "Give up on writing, everyone will be grateful when you leave."

Been slaving over school, sleep is a luxury

Been slaving over school, sleep is a luxury "You're a waste of time, you're uncreative, there's just nonsense in every rhyme."

Been slaving over school, sleep is a luxury "You're a waste of time, you're uncreative, there's just nonsense in every rhyme." Learned to tell myself that I'll never be worthy

Been slaving over school, sleep is a luxury "You're a waste of time, you're uncreative, there's just nonsense in every rhyme." Learned to tell myself that I'll never be worthy "You're a failure at life, you're writing should be considered a crime."

Realized that my life is just an uphill climb

Realized that my life is just an uphill climb I get halfway up but I slip down every time

Realized that my life is just an uphill climb I get halfway up but I slip down every time "All your friends are better than you, you'll always be behind."

Realized that my life is just an uphill climb I get halfway up but I slip down every time "All your friends are better than you, you'll always be behind." Sometimes it makes me wonder if I'll ever be fine..

"No matter how hard you try, everyone else will always be better and you'll never be missed."

"No matter how hard you try, everyone else will always be better and you'll never be missed." But what people don't realize is this;

"No matter how hard you try, everyone else will always be better and you'll never be missed." But what people don't realize is this; The cynical critic that messes up my mind

"No matter how hard you try, everyone else will always be better and you'll never be missed." But what people don't realize is this; The cynical critic that messes up my mind Has been myself and my thoughts this entire time.

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