Final Summer
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emery_iller
emery_iller Writing to improve, feedback encouraged
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A first attempt at dabbling in iambic pentameter.

*Note: This is re-published from yesterday since it was first published during a time when Commaful was glitting. As always, I'd be very appreciative of feedback; this was, after all, a first try.

Final Summer

Fields that birthed old daydreams now decaying

Fields that birthed old daydreams now decaying away, away, to summer reveries

Fields that birthed old daydreams now decaying away, away, to summer reveries There the rays of sun are playing, paling

Fields that birthed old daydreams now decaying away, away, to summer reveries There the rays of sun are playing, paling the vibrant, laughing hues of memories

to somber white, despoiled quiet husks

From golden shine to piercing echos; Bright

From golden shine to piercing echos; Bright those shattered diamonds, colorless, do gleam

From golden shine to piercing echos; Bright those shattered diamonds, colorless, do gleam But now delirious, have lost their light,

From golden shine to piercing echos; Bright those shattered diamonds, colorless, do gleam But now delirious, have lost their light, never again will silver starlight beam

Except in dreams of ‘jeweled and warming haze

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