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DO TREES ENJOY THE SUNSET?

As we walked along a wooded path beside the river’s edge enjoying the evening breeze

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Rocky Flight  airplane stories

Rocky Flight

Found this in my archive with reference to the river Popper theory of Paul Ehrlich. The environment is considered a plane. And rivets (species) that hold it together. If each passenger pulls one out t...

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Cloudy spell clouds stories

Cloudy spell

Alice's adventures in the wonderland can wait for this moment of beauty, can they not?

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7 Hours Of Wait school stories

7 Hours Of Wait

From someone who passionately dislikes school.

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Puzzling  thoughts stories

Puzzling

Self critical

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The Table, The Study 


The table that remains a mere desk on usual days 
Is now a study for me. 
The hours that seem persistent to tick when bored, 
Now seem to race me. 
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The Table, The Study The table that remains a mere desk on usual days  Is now a study for me.  The hours that seem persistent to tick when bored,  Now seem to race me. 

Gates and Zuckerberg have definitely proved it's an idea that takes to stir the world and make it spin on your pinky. But what if I don't seem to have an idea? Can I just sit waiting for it to pop? Le...

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