Ashna

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Bronze Comma

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Ashna . 5 years ago
As touching a poem can get.
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Profe Steve . 5 years ago
Remembering
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Poetry.
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luna . 5 years ago
the prison cell
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Ashna . 5 years ago
White Once More
Jealousy. A self destruction. The flower which failed to realize her own angelic white beauty and envied the ones pigmented. The envy grows till is burns and rots her. At her end she realizes, she was...
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Hey all make sure you give this touching, sweet piece of work a read.
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Jim . 5 years ago
THE WEEPING WILLOW TREE
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Camphor (Her Strong Aroma)
{info: chenin blanc is white wine} A note on a man who is left reminiscing his late wife by the tree she planted and memories of her that live strong. I chose Camphor tree as its scent and ability to ...
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Birthday Bang
See what I did there?
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Beyond the Bedroom Door
Trying out some rhymes lately. (((I deleted one of my poems on mistake LOVE THAT FOR ME HAHA)))
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Ashna . 5 years ago
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Jim . 5 years ago
THEY ASKED THEIR GOD...
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Truly Fantasia
Inspired by my mother.
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Ashna . 5 years ago
A sweet rhyme. Give it a read
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Jim . 5 years ago
DO TREES ENJOY THE SUNSET?
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Rocky Flight
Found this in my archive with reference to the river Popper theory of Paul Ehrlich. The environment is considered a plane. And rivets (species) that hold it together. If each passenger pulls one out t...
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Cloudy spell
Alice's adventures in the wonderland can wait for this moment of beauty, can they not?
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Ashna . 5 years ago
7 Hours Of Wait
From someone who passionately dislikes school.
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Ashna . 5 years ago
Puzzling
Self critical
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Ashna . 5 years ago
The Table, The Study The table that remains a mere desk on usual days  Is now a study for me.  The hours that seem persistent to tick when bored,  Now seem to race me. 
Gates and Zuckerberg have definitely proved it's an idea that takes to stir the world and make it spin on your pinky. But what if I don't seem to have an idea? Can I just sit waiting for it to pop? Le...
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