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Surrender Short Stories

Here are the top Surrender short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "deeper", "rose", and more.
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Heart of Darkness
stadarooni Commaful Star
6 years ago
394
17
72

  • disrespect

  • deeper

  • rose

  • chest

  • wish

    • A collaboration of thirty on a very affectionate affair of poetry pizzazz! Enjoy!
    An Apology
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    277
    1
    36

  • like

  • forgiveness

  • sad

  • hope

  • forgive

    • My white-flag.
    closer
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    5 years ago
    197
    0
    21

  • poem

  • poetry

  • emotions

  • ink

  • stain

    • quieting, the surrender beginning all too easy.
    Surrender
    mipoet Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    76
    1
    3

  • sad

  • hope

  • emotions

  • anxiety

  • surrender

    • The sadness comes in waves. Dark days. Dark thoughts.
    White Flag
    tylersimpkinsss Silver Comma
    5 years ago
    49
    0
    1

  • suicide

  • you're-not-alone

  • surrender

  • mental health month

    • Dedicated to the people we lost to suicide. Rest In PeaceπŸ–€
    Jerzi, Jerzii, Jerziiii
    urlocalstoner Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    43
    0
    4

  • @jerziiiiiiii

  • surrender

    • Surrender now and you may keep your smiles :))))) @jerziiiiiiii
    Love
    shayloves
    4 years ago
    38
    0
    0

  • love

  • surrender

  • destiny

  • desire

    • This poem is about the role that love plays in our lives...
    War Zone
    philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    37
    0
    2

  • feelings

  • poetry

  • love

  • hate-

  • hate

    • War Zone disguised as love.
    Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒
    maddie_hatter Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    31
    0
    1

  • poetry

  • poem

  • narrative-poem

  • narrative poetry

  • villanelle

    • My first attempt writing a villanelle; forgive any eventual mistakes. If you enjoyed this piece, give it a thumbs up and let me know your thoughts in the comments! Any advice is very much welcome a...
    Forfeit: The Poem
    fallen_star Power Reader
    2 years ago
    30
    0
    5

  • forfeit

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • obsessed

  • promt

    • Changed the title a bit because I'm a little bored of writing just forfeit over and over again
    Surrender
    amalee Gifted Writer
    a year ago
    28
    0
    2

  • sad

  • sadness

  • sad poem

  • sadpoem

  • poetry

    • These deranged thoughts are taking over my brain
    πš†π™Έπ™½πšƒπ™΄πšβ€™πš‚ π™΄π™Όπ™±π™΄πš...
    carillon_twins Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    26
    0
    0

  • villanelle

  • poetry

  • poem

  • aprilfire

  • contest

    • β€œEmber amber, do not condone β€” o’ bare bruises fire!” A villanelle for @wafflecatz β€˜s β€œFire Contest” on the prompt β€˜Ashes’.
    In too deep
    anykovarikov
    4 years ago
    26
    0
    2

  • deep

  • feelings

  • feeling

  • love

  • surrender

    • For you I'd bleed myself drain. A short poem about sinking deeper and falling too hard.
    Surrender
    aurelie8874 Gifted Writer
    2 years ago
    25
    0
    3

  • surrender

  • love

  • poet

  • poem

    • Leonard Cohen said it best Love is a cold and broken Hallelujah
    Deep probing eyes,
    tall_dreams
    7 years ago
    15
    0
    0

  • silky

  • bedtime

  • explore

  • pressure

  • broad

    • Surrender
    blissfullxo Bronze Comma
    5 years ago
    14
    0
    2

  • love

  • relationships

  • passion

  • sex

  • couples

    • Lust, Obsession, Love....Forever
    You are the one I'd let go...
    famouspoems Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    15
    0
    0

  • poet

  • wine

  • poetry

  • sandra

  • allow

    • December
    poeticwolf
    a year ago
    14
    0
    0

  • cold

  • december

  • remember

  • surrender

    • a made up song that come through my head one morning
    Silver, Silver
    memento
    5 years ago
    11
    0
    3

  • surreal

  • silver

  • surrender

    • Tangling herself in silver tresses underneath the earth
    Surrender
    chrismarrione
    6 years ago
    13
    0
    2

  • surrender

  • ex-lovers

  • love

  • break up

  • lovers

    • Love no longer dreams together. Love dreams in separate beds.
    Heart of Darkness
    stadarooni Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    394
    17
    72

  • disrespect

  • deeper

  • rose

  • chest

  • wish

    • A collaboration of thirty on a very affectionate affair of poetry pizzazz! Enjoy!
    An Apology
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    277
    1
    36

  • like

  • forgiveness

  • sad

  • hope

  • forgive

    • My white-flag.
    closer
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    5 years ago
    197
    0
    21

  • poem

  • poetry

  • emotions

  • ink

  • stain

    • quieting, the surrender beginning all too easy.
    Surrender
    mipoet Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    76
    1
    3

  • sad

  • hope

  • emotions

  • anxiety

  • surrender

    • The sadness comes in waves. Dark days. Dark thoughts.
    White Flag
    tylersimpkinsss Silver Comma
    5 years ago
    49
    0
    1

  • suicide

  • you're-not-alone

  • surrender

  • mental health month

    • Dedicated to the people we lost to suicide. Rest In PeaceπŸ–€
    Jerzi, Jerzii, Jerziiii
    urlocalstoner Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    43
    0
    4

  • @jerziiiiiiii

  • surrender

    • Surrender now and you may keep your smiles :))))) @jerziiiiiiii
    Love
    shayloves
    4 years ago
    38
    0
    0

  • love

  • surrender

  • destiny

  • desire

    • This poem is about the role that love plays in our lives...
    War Zone
    philmichaelwebs Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    37
    0
    2

  • feelings

  • poetry

  • love

  • hate-

  • hate

    • War Zone disguised as love.
    Surrender the 𝔱π”₯𝔯𝔬𝔫𝔒
    maddie_hatter Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    31
    0
    1

  • poetry

  • poem

  • narrative-poem

  • narrative poetry

  • villanelle

    • My first attempt writing a villanelle; forgive any eventual mistakes. If you enjoyed this piece, give it a thumbs up and let me know your thoughts in the comments! Any advice is very much welcome a...
    Forfeit: The Poem
    fallen_star Power Reader
    2 years ago
    30
    0
    5

  • forfeit

  • daily-prompt

  • dailyprompt

  • obsessed

  • promt

    • Changed the title a bit because I'm a little bored of writing just forfeit over and over again
    Surrender
    amalee Gifted Writer
    a year ago
    28
    0
    2

  • sad

  • sadness

  • sad poem

  • sadpoem

  • poetry

    • These deranged thoughts are taking over my brain
    πš†π™Έπ™½πšƒπ™΄πšβ€™πš‚ π™΄π™Όπ™±π™΄πš...
    carillon_twins Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    26
    0
    0

  • villanelle

  • poetry

  • poem

  • aprilfire

  • contest

    • β€œEmber amber, do not condone β€” o’ bare bruises fire!” A villanelle for @wafflecatz β€˜s β€œFire Contest” on the prompt β€˜Ashes’.
    In too deep
    anykovarikov
    4 years ago
    26
    0
    2

  • deep

  • feelings

  • feeling

  • love

  • surrender

    • For you I'd bleed myself drain. A short poem about sinking deeper and falling too hard.
    Surrender
    aurelie8874 Gifted Writer
    2 years ago
    25
    0
    3

  • surrender

  • love

  • poet

  • poem

    • Leonard Cohen said it best Love is a cold and broken Hallelujah
    Deep probing eyes,
    tall_dreams
    7 years ago
    15
    0
    0

  • silky

  • bedtime

  • explore

  • pressure

  • broad

    • Surrender
    blissfullxo Bronze Comma
    5 years ago
    14
    0
    2

  • love

  • relationships

  • passion

  • sex

  • couples

    • Lust, Obsession, Love....Forever
    You are the one I'd let go...
    famouspoems Gifted Writer
    5 years ago
    15
    0
    0

  • poet

  • wine

  • poetry

  • sandra

  • allow

    • December
    poeticwolf
    a year ago
    14
    0
    0

  • cold

  • december

  • remember

  • surrender

    • a made up song that come through my head one morning
    Silver, Silver
    memento
    5 years ago
    11
    0
    3

  • surreal

  • silver

  • surrender

    • Tangling herself in silver tresses underneath the earth
    Surrender
    chrismarrione
    6 years ago
    13
    0
    2

  • surrender

  • ex-lovers

  • love

  • break up

  • lovers

    • Love no longer dreams together. Love dreams in separate beds.