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Sour Short Stories

Here are the top Sour short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "crush", "feelings", and more.
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should've
aspendao Commaful Star
3 years ago
269
0
8

  • poem

  • crush

  • feelings

  • short poem

  • shortpoem

    • sorry i've been gone so long. finally, here's a short poem I managed to pen
    Ayy I got some of my favor...
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    250
    0
    24

  • sour

  • candy

    • I'm immune to sour stuff so I'm gonna eat them all today >:3
    𝚜𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚌𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜.
    marigold Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    147
    1
    4

  • cherries

  • sour

  • bitter

  • kiss

  • love

    • ~ bitter lullabies rasp in my ears ~
    Oh yeah~
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    149
    0
    20

  • warheads

  • candy

  • sour

    • I love these so much UwU
    cherry-flavored lies
    skylia Commabassador
    a year ago
    138
    0
    26

  • poem

  • poetry

  • free verse

  • freeverse

  • lies

    • "maybe you thought the sweetness of the cherry-flavored lies would overtake the bitterness of the truth."
    Inner Beast
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    126
    2
    9

  • honey

  • sin

  • inner

  • free

  • sweet

    • She is sweet as sin, but sour for the soul.
    Warheads because why not
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    108
    0
    11

  • candy

  • sour

  • warheads

    • I'm too obsessed with this candy omg XDD
    Living with Lemon Boy
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    98
    1
    12

  • lemon boy

  • cavetown

  • song

  • based on a song

  • personal experience

    • WARNING: themes of past suicidal thoughts A poem inspired by a song and my own experiences
    The Flaws
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    94
    0
    9

  • wings

  • fly

  • flaw

  • imperfect

  • wrong

    • A poem.
    What's Missing?
    bruvton Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    92
    0
    7

  • satisfied

  • blue

  • sour

  • dissatisfied

  • sorry

    • Why am I so ungrateful?
    sting
    orcastogether Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    92
    0
    8

  • life

  • sweet

  • sour

  • lemon

  • sting

    • Super short poem on... uh... lemons.
    Alec InkTober Compromise
    theloremaster Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    45
    0
    19

  • stick

  • young alec

  • older alec

  • meme

  • vibe

    • For some words on the list, I will do them here as sentences and quotes. Lo Siento/sorry children
    Lemons
    tylersimpkinsss Silver Comma
    4 years ago
    39
    0
    2

  • lemons

  • when life gives you lemons

  • sour

  • bitter

  • squeeze

    • I could totally go for some fresh lemonade right about now🍋
    Quote for today"LEMONADE".
    seamarhawkings Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    36
    0
    1

  • lemons

  • sour

  • sweet

  • love

    • It's my quote.
    The good guy trying to han...
    tall_dreams
    7 years ago
    24
    0
    1

  • poisons

  • choice

  • water

  • naah

  • sour

    • I hate LEMONS RANT lol!
    galaxypower Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    20
    1
    2

  • lemon

  • galaxypower

  • sour

  • thoughts

    • So, you relate to this? Hmm...
    You set everything on fire...
    atul
    5 years ago
    19
    0
    2

  • like

  • love

  • feeling

  • sweet

  • sour

    • You set everything on fire but i didn't aim for ?
    "You're just sour because ...
    naruto
    6 years ago
    16
    0
    0

  • deidara

  • fanfiction

  • pooh

  • touched

  • fainted

    • LEMONADE
    seamarhawkings Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    16
    0
    0

  • lemonade

  • people

  • sour

  • life

    • It's a thought.
    hot & sour fish soup –
    poetics Gifted Writer
    6 years ago
    14
    0
    0

  • poems

  • santiago

  • soup

  • ingredients

  • sour

    • should've
    aspendao Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    269
    0
    8

  • poem

  • crush

  • feelings

  • short poem

  • shortpoem

    • sorry i've been gone so long. finally, here's a short poem I managed to pen
    Ayy I got some of my favor...
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    250
    0
    24

  • sour

  • candy

    • I'm immune to sour stuff so I'm gonna eat them all today >:3
    𝚜𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚌𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚛𝚒𝚎𝚜.
    marigold Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    147
    1
    4

  • cherries

  • sour

  • bitter

  • kiss

  • love

    • ~ bitter lullabies rasp in my ears ~
    Oh yeah~
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    149
    0
    20

  • warheads

  • candy

  • sour

    • I love these so much UwU
    cherry-flavored lies
    skylia Commabassador
    a year ago
    138
    0
    26

  • poem

  • poetry

  • free verse

  • freeverse

  • lies

    • "maybe you thought the sweetness of the cherry-flavored lies would overtake the bitterness of the truth."
    Inner Beast
    kaylynn Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    126
    2
    9

  • honey

  • sin

  • inner

  • free

  • sweet

    • She is sweet as sin, but sour for the soul.
    Warheads because why not
    retrothefloofyt Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    108
    0
    11

  • candy

  • sour

  • warheads

    • I'm too obsessed with this candy omg XDD
    Living with Lemon Boy
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    98
    1
    12

  • lemon boy

  • cavetown

  • song

  • based on a song

  • personal experience

    • WARNING: themes of past suicidal thoughts A poem inspired by a song and my own experiences
    The Flaws
    wasteofpaint Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    94
    0
    9

  • wings

  • fly

  • flaw

  • imperfect

  • wrong

    • A poem.
    What's Missing?
    bruvton Commaful Star
    6 years ago
    92
    0
    7

  • satisfied

  • blue

  • sour

  • dissatisfied

  • sorry

    • Why am I so ungrateful?
    sting
    orcastogether Commaful Star
    3 years ago
    92
    0
    8

  • life

  • sweet

  • sour

  • lemon

  • sting

    • Super short poem on... uh... lemons.
    Alec InkTober Compromise
    theloremaster Gifted Writer
    3 years ago
    45
    0
    19

  • stick

  • young alec

  • older alec

  • meme

  • vibe

    • For some words on the list, I will do them here as sentences and quotes. Lo Siento/sorry children
    Lemons
    tylersimpkinsss Silver Comma
    4 years ago
    39
    0
    2

  • lemons

  • when life gives you lemons

  • sour

  • bitter

  • squeeze

    • I could totally go for some fresh lemonade right about now🍋
    Quote for today"LEMONADE".
    seamarhawkings Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    36
    0
    1

  • lemons

  • sour

  • sweet

  • love

    • It's my quote.
    The good guy trying to han...
    tall_dreams
    7 years ago
    24
    0
    1

  • poisons

  • choice

  • water

  • naah

  • sour

    • I hate LEMONS RANT lol!
    galaxypower Gifted Writer
    4 years ago
    20
    1
    2

  • lemon

  • galaxypower

  • sour

  • thoughts

    • So, you relate to this? Hmm...
    You set everything on fire...
    atul
    5 years ago
    19
    0
    2

  • like

  • love

  • feeling

  • sweet

  • sour

    • You set everything on fire but i didn't aim for ?
    "You're just sour because ...
    naruto
    6 years ago
    16
    0
    0

  • deidara

  • fanfiction

  • pooh

  • touched

  • fainted

    • LEMONADE
    seamarhawkings Commaful Star
    4 years ago
    16
    0
    0

  • lemonade

  • people

  • sour

  • life

    • It's a thought.
    hot & sour fish soup –
    poetics Gifted Writer
    6 years ago
    14
    0
    0

  • poems

  • santiago

  • soup

  • ingredients

  • sour