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Help Me Improve Short Stories

Here are the top Help Me Improve short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "horror", "thriller", and more.
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Summer night secretsBy: Ni...
nicoledenis
7 years ago
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    • Found poem, using some quotes from the book Floors by Patrick Carman. It's not very good, could you give me advice?
    Summer night secretsBy: Ni...
    nicoledenis
    7 years ago
    1
    0
    0

  • found poem

  • help me improve

  • constructive criticism

    • Found poem, using some quotes from the book Floors by Patrick Carman. It's not very good, could you give me advice?