๐๐ก๐๐ณ๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ก๐๐ง๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐๐ฅ๐๐ฌ; ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ข๐ซ๐๐ ๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐ โ๐๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐จ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฌโ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ง ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ง ๐๐๐ฆ๐ข๐ฅ๐ญ๐จ๐ง.
โ๐ธ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๏ฟฝ...
A second attempt at ghazal. It is a challenging form to write. Thank you @pattersonbear for telling me about this.
๐ ๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ป๐ข๐ญ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ด๐ฑ๐ช๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐บ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ค๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต๐ด ๐ช๐ฏ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ๐ช๐ด๐ต๐ข๐ฏ.
๐ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฅ๐ช๐ค๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฏ. ๐๐ฐ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ข๐ง๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ณ๐ข๐จ...
This is my very first attempt at Ghazal poetry. Let me know how it is๐
Third attempt at ghazal. A light, airy piece. (look up ghazal and give it a try)
We started work on it about 6 months ago. Hope you like it. ๐
CoMixed from @priktasrivastav: https://commaful.com/play/priktasrivastav/an-aspiration-a-pikku-and-summer-collab/
An exercise in Ghazal form. Give it a try! Brief tutorial at the end.
An experiment with a new form: Ghazal. There are very specific, very rigid rules. Thank you, @pattersonbear for the tip.
A Ghazal on hope and self appreciation in order to defeat depression and to invoke strength in the face of life's challenges. It took me agers to make hope you like it folks. Merry Christmas!
Thank you, @lostintheblue for the suggestion of this poetic form. I include a description of what it is.
There was a great distance, Of land and sea between you and me, a worldly dissonance. Mountains and deserts, I would have traversed. Though the visa declared that it remained, that god awful distance...
๐๐ก๐๐ณ๐๐ฅ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฉ๐จ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ก๐๐ง๐๐๐๐๐ฌ๐ฒ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐๐๐ฅ๐๐ฌ; ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐ฉ๐ข๐ซ๐๐ ๐๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐ โ๐๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐จ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ง๐๐ฌโ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐๐ง ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ง ๐๐๐ฆ๐ข๐ฅ๐ญ๐จ๐ง.
โ๐ธ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๏ฟฝ...
A second attempt at ghazal. It is a challenging form to write. Thank you @pattersonbear for telling me about this.
๐ ๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ป๐ข๐ญ ๐ช๐ฏ๐ด๐ฑ๐ช๐ณ๐ฆ๐ฅ ๐ฃ๐บ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ณ๐ฆ๐ค๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต ๐ฆ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฏ๐ต๐ด ๐ช๐ฏ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ๐ช๐ด๐ต๐ข๐ฏ.
๐ ๐ฅ๐ฆ๐ฅ๐ช๐ค๐ข๐ต๐ช๐ฐ๐ฏ ๐ต๐ฐ ๐ข๐ญ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐จ๐ฉ๐ข๐ฏ ๐ธ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ฆ๐ฏ. ๐๐ฐ๐ท๐ฆ๐ฏ ๐ข๐ง๐ต๐ฆ๐ณ ๐ต๐ฉ๐ฆ ๐ต๐ณ๐ข๐จ...
This is my very first attempt at Ghazal poetry. Let me know how it is๐
Third attempt at ghazal. A light, airy piece. (look up ghazal and give it a try)
We started work on it about 6 months ago. Hope you like it. ๐
CoMixed from @priktasrivastav: https://commaful.com/play/priktasrivastav/an-aspiration-a-pikku-and-summer-collab/
An exercise in Ghazal form. Give it a try! Brief tutorial at the end.
An experiment with a new form: Ghazal. There are very specific, very rigid rules. Thank you, @pattersonbear for the tip.
A Ghazal on hope and self appreciation in order to defeat depression and to invoke strength in the face of life's challenges. It took me agers to make hope you like it folks. Merry Christmas!
Thank you, @lostintheblue for the suggestion of this poetic form. I include a description of what it is.
There was a great distance, Of land and sea between you and me, a worldly dissonance. Mountains and deserts, I would have traversed. Though the visa declared that it remained, that god awful distance...