i like this one. Should I ask him to prom> Comment what you think.
This is for @stitchastory 'Identity Contest' for the prompt - Identity Lost
A rondelet after so long. This ain't pretty!! Just what I feel.
(another song-ish thing... more poetic though) (Inspired from "Lost Boy" Song, so it has about the same beat & part of the meaning.)
George came to a shop in Sydney, Australia. He asked Tim, shop owner for frame.
Her glasses caught the sunlight Holding it there like a little emblem of fire she could keep
I have a picture frame and memories with you
But what I really want is you
we don't need to be picture perfect, to fit in a tiny frame. . .
(I tried to convey a meaningful message- did it work?)
i like this one. Should I ask him to prom> Comment what you think.
This is for @stitchastory 'Identity Contest' for the prompt - Identity Lost
A rondelet after so long. This ain't pretty!! Just what I feel.
(another song-ish thing... more poetic though) (Inspired from "Lost Boy" Song, so it has about the same beat & part of the meaning.)
George came to a shop in Sydney, Australia. He asked Tim, shop owner for frame.
Her glasses caught the sunlight Holding it there like a little emblem of fire she could keep
I have a picture frame and memories with you
But what I really want is you
we don't need to be picture perfect, to fit in a tiny frame. . .
(I tried to convey a meaningful message- did it work?)