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Feedback Requested Short Stories

Here are the top Feedback Requested short stories, fanfiction, poetry, and posts on Commaful, including topics like "horror", "thriller", and more.
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Breathe
lovelace123 Silver Comma
3 years ago
26
0
2

  • come and see~

  • quickwrite

  • quick write

  • feedback requested

  • not very good

    • This is a short quick write. I'd appreciate if I was given feedback. It's just quick writing so it's not very good.
    Breathe
    lovelace123 Silver Comma
    3 years ago
    26
    0
    2

  • come and see~

  • quickwrite

  • quick write

  • feedback requested

  • not very good

    • This is a short quick write. I'd appreciate if I was given feedback. It's just quick writing so it's not very good.