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Not Fine Poetry

Here are some Not Fine poems on Commaful, including titles such as "Broken Pieces."
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Broken Pieces
photographygirl Bronze Comma
5 years ago
34
2
1

  • acid

  • judged

  • not fine

  • point of view

  • acid tears

    • We'll safety-pin the pieces of our broken hearts back together Patching up all the holes until we both feel much better Deleted things, I really meant So now I'll say the things I never sent
    fine
    lalalabutterfly Gifted Writer
    7 years ago
    17
    0
    1

  • not fine

  • free verse

  • youre not fine

  • sort of

  • monster

    • You're not fine.
    I'm not fine
    lostangel Commabassador
    8 years ago
    5
    0
    3

  • sad

  • not fine

  • hurt

    • Broken Pieces
    photographygirl Bronze Comma
    5 years ago
    34
    2
    1

  • acid

  • judged

  • not fine

  • point of view

  • acid tears

    • We'll safety-pin the pieces of our broken hearts back together Patching up all the holes until we both feel much better Deleted things, I really meant So now I'll say the things I never sent
    fine
    lalalabutterfly Gifted Writer
    7 years ago
    17
    0
    1

  • not fine

  • free verse

  • youre not fine

  • sort of

  • monster

    • You're not fine.
    I'm not fine
    lostangel Commabassador
    8 years ago
    5
    0
    3

  • sad

  • not fine

  • hurt