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Is this beatiful. Or just the pathetic contrived result of a lonely heart.

☑️ Read 10:34

by windsomelight

Haha well you know

Haha you know actually

Aha actually

. . .

. . .

You'd been typing for five minutes. The more time that passes, the more apprehensive you become of your reply.

Are there people who can just effortlessly type replies to anything like its normal? Why can't that be me?

Haha yeah

Lame. But whatever.

It's not like it matters. Why should I care.

You know maybe this would be easier if we saw each other more than once a year. If three texts a day wasn't all I had to look forward to.

Maybe this would be easier if there were more than a question mark after the word 'us'

Maybe this would be easier if I thought I knew you

But I don't know if I do

This started with just you caring. So why am I the one overthinking?

Why am I the one stuck with haze in my head

Smoke in my cells

Maybe this would be easier if I knew you were the one

Maybe this would be easier

If I knew you weren't

. . .

. . .

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
5 months agoReply
It is neither beautiful nor contrived. It is a skillful written examination of a mundane and common occurrence. But you caught the gist of the conflict. It bugs the hell out of us and we want clarity. There is no clarity in romance. Great post!!!!!

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5 months agoReply
this is super creative!!! nicely done :)

mitchelBronze Comma"Fight it,take the pain,ignite it"
5 months agoReply
That goes deep..I kinda liked the idea with the text messages and how you connected them with your thoughts. It's different then other stories here:) Keep it up you're talented:)