evanescent
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vivianchill
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adjective: ev·a·nes·cent \-sənt\. vanishing; fading away; fleeting. [entry for the poetry slam!]

evanescent

by vivian

i could see the galaxy in her eyes—

but she saw only dirt in mine.

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izal5416Bronze Commasave me
a year agoReply
Beautiful poem that's short and sweet. (Is it one-sided love? If so, you expressed it perfectly.)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@vivian I am glad you told me that the poem was not about you. I'll rest easier tonight.

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil : advice to live by - thanks for the comment! I'm relieved to report that this isnt based off of personal experience, and I hope that I'll never need to relate with this poem. :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@vivian Obviously a mismatch. Hey, buddy you can do a lot better and not much worse. RUN!

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a year agoReply
@sydney : thank you! i got it from dictionary.com (disclaimer lol)

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a year agoReply
short and sweet :) i love the dictionary definition in the description haha