boys and spaces
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venicetwitter: @muyven
Autoplay OFF  •  a year ago
GUYZ THERE WAS THIS CUTE BOY THAT INITIATED A CONVERSATION WITH ME, AND HE WAS THE FIRST BOY WHO DID THAT!!! I LOOK UP TO HIM SINCE IDK BUT BECAUSE HE IS NICE AND SWEET AND QUIET AND SMART!!!! GUYS HE IS CUTE, I LIKE HIM. AND NOW I GOT INSPIRED SO I WROTE A POEM.

boys and spaces

by venice

he came from beyond the universe, from the milky way, to me

and maybe he was that wish upon a star

and I'll give him my hands, like it's my heart

but he will never invade the spaces in between my fingers and intertwine our hands together

to guard my space; as if i have no more control over here

these spaces are not yours to fill in, my love

it's yours to leave

all i am saying is that, i am not hard to love

i just know how to love myself when no one else can.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Aside from however cute this boy is. your poem is better. It is a master stroke. I loved the tempo and the easiness of the words. The message about the knowledge of self-love is precious. More of your peers need to tread your path. I loved it. Great poem!!!!