Godless
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thisisstaciaCommunity member
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This is my current relationship with religion.

Godless

by thisisstacia

I leak sweat and blood and tears

in hopes of drinking in some love.

I give days and months and years

in hopes of getting back some time.

And I pray to gods and goddesses alike

though I know we live godless.

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil That really means alot to me. Thank you for your feedback!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This is definitely an attention getter. I was impressed by your choice of words. They said just enough to mean what you say without adding unnecessary verbiage. The meter was such that it had a very easy tempo. I loved the way you delivered your message. Great poem.