Blue: Part One
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sydneybrownlet's go on a trip down memory lane.
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This is a series, and it is about a former friend of mine, who is aware that this poem exists. I may post it all in the same day, or I may not. We'll see how I feel later.

Blue: Part One

by sydneybrown

Fingers flying, The notes jumped around

Running in circles, going crazy. Those were his favorite.

He always like to wail And scream with all his might.

His tribute to Maynard Ferguson. Those were his songs.

But I always liked it, When he played slow jazz,

Especially when he improvised

See, those were his notes.

No one else wrote them. No one else dictated them.

And it was there,

In his slow syncopation, His vibratos and legato,

I fell.

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a year agoReply
@sydney Thank you! Also, the first thing I noticed was that we share a name. :)

sydneybrownlet's go on a trip down memory lane.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil To answer your question, more friend in absentia at the moment. Thank you for your kind words. I always wonder about my structure.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
beautifully written!! the musical terms really fit well. kinda random, but looks like we also share a name :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Former friend? or Friend in absentia? It doesn't matter I'm just an old gossip. The poem flows so nicely the structure of your verses is immaculate. Your ability to place each word by carressing them and gently putting them into place is music.

bobBronze CommaAll hail BOB
a year agoReply
aww