Do You See?

suburbiasydneyhopeless romantic
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Do You See?

by suburbiasydney

Do you see how fresh a forest looks with its golden sunlight and emerald leaves

Do you see the fiery autumn leaves tumble like scarlet theives

Or do you see the deep valleys as they rest their cheeks ?

Do you see the colossal that protect the valley with mighty peaks?

Perhaps, do you see the deep blue sea, in all it's vast glory?

But do you see, Time's gradual carvings, etching a story?

Do you see how something can be life to another?

Maybe try and see the this and not the other

But most importantly, can you see what it could be?

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bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller,
7 months agoReply
@suburbiasydney You did well. It is a challenge to use this format.

suburbiasydneyhopeless romantic
7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil aww thanks so much. This is my first Commaful short story as I've only ever used Wattpad <3

bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller,
7 months agoReply
This is very well done. I love your outlook on the beauty of the planet we stomp on. Your verses a descriptive. Great poem!!!!!