Jealous stars
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Jealous stars

by stridder75

What if I told you a boy could teach the stars to understand

Poems about the moon?

So is explaining one's love to another

To jealous stars.

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9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I just wanted to let you know that your comments make my day. I have a bunch of these types of "peoms/stories" in the front cover of my prayer journal, as bookmarks, and on the backs of notes for school. But I never thought anyone would ever notice them or comment. Just wanted you to know that you are appreciated, even if it's a perfect stranger telling you that.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This was clever and well written. The terse verses were perfect for the understanding. You left room for wonder. Great poem!!!!!!