Neon Nightingale
Neon Nightingale tanka stories
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Neon nights, composed of air.

Neon Nightingale

Twilight tastes treble,

Twilight tastes treble, Baritone bursting blushes.

Twilight tastes treble, Baritone bursting blushes. Tenor tingles time.

Twilight tastes treble, Baritone bursting blushes. Tenor tingles time. Soprano staccatos smiles,

Twilight tastes treble, Baritone bursting blushes. Tenor tingles time. Soprano staccatos smiles, Jazz jubilates the jaded.

(Aside) Hey, Commaful! I had a bit more free time today so I decided to create a small tanka for all of you. :)

I had the idea for this piece for a while, like the haiku yesterday, but this one was one that I wanted to use the senses in to create a more vivid atmosphere of jazz (more sax oriented) and night. I hope that comes across here and that each line contains its own image to contribute to a larger one!

Like the last piece, too, I might use some ideas from this tanka for a larger piece if you all have interest. :) I hope that you are all doing well!

Take care, Commaful,and thanks for reading! Write on! <3 P.S. I'm also starting to use my creative writing Instagram account more! If you want to follow it, it's @stadaroonii. :D

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