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stadarooni
stadarooniEmpathy is the human superpower.
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A flower blooms in a dark room.

Luna

Dear Luna,

Dear Luna, please bathe the night in your beauteous berceuse.

Dear Luna, please bathe the night in your beauteous berceuse. Hush, shush the shimmering shackles of daylight in lunar lulls,

Dear Luna, please bathe the night in your beauteous berceuse. Hush, shush the shimmering shackles of daylight in lunar lulls, dreaming me into a stream of fantasies till reveille.

Please sparkle and dazzle, my midnight muse.

Please sparkle and dazzle, my midnight muse. Shine worlds in white wine, grow your glimmer like grapevines

Please sparkle and dazzle, my midnight muse. Shine worlds in white wine, grow your glimmer like grapevines – never dull –

Please sparkle and dazzle, my midnight muse. Shine worlds in white wine, grow your glimmer like grapevines – never dull – swirl in starlight, take flight, your wispy whispers write the world bright.

P.S.

P.S. Your lyrics always have a lifeline,

P.S. Your lyrics always have a lifeline, never cratered in cookie-cutter copies

P.S. Your lyrics always have a lifeline, never cratered in cookie-cutter copies but in poetry passion.

With you, the shadows shy away.

(Aside) Hey, Commaful! This piece was A LOT of fun to make, and refreshing for me, too! It made me happy and the letter-like format of it was a lot of fun to delve into.

I had some inspiration for this one, like a piece from a user on this site from a LONG time ago (@grayxskies), an idea that I had from around that time that never got written, a rap song, and an alternative pop song. For those latter two, I wish I could have made use of more ideas from them.

I wrote this piece with a light rhyme scheme in mind, but it didn't go all the way through and isn't really present in the P.S. section. However, there is a lot of rhyming and I did tone down the alliteration A BIT for this one, so I hope that came through. :)

This piece seems, to me, to be of love for the care of something or someone and how they make you feel, despite any imperfections that they may have. :) Writing it was a breath of fresh air and it turned a bad day into a better one.

Thank you all for reading, and take good care! Love you all! Keep on writing, Commaful! <3

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