On the Edge
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SomewhereintimeI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
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Sometimes even the best of us find ourselves on the edge.

On the Edge

by Somewhereintime

She once had everything.

A loving family and a bright future ahead of her.

Her life was a dream to most.

But the time will come for every dream to end.

Hers was no exception.

She spiraled out of control.

The family she once loved was gone.

Her future ripped away.

The people she called 'friend' no longer cared.

And when she had no where else to turn, she sat on the edge.

She said to herself,

"If I die today, nothing will change.

Their memories will die with me.

But if I pick myself back up and keep on living,

then I still have a chance."

A chance that the future will be better.

And it was.

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SomewhereintimeBronze CommaI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
10 months agoReply
@hopefulhorizon thank you :D It means a lot.

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10 months agoReply
Really great poem!

SomewhereintimeBronze CommaI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil That is exactly the message I was trying to portray with this story :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was and edgy story. You did a great job of distilling down to the essence of the matter. I agree where there is life, there is hope. All you have to do is want it bad enough. Sounds like her prior life was pretty much all smoke and mirrors.

SomewhereintimeBronze CommaI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
a year agoReply
@ryuwelp00 YESHH!!! They are all adorable together XD

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a year agoReply
@somewhereintime Of course! But Sorinozuka and Watanuki are lovable too XDD

SomewhereintimeBronze CommaI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
a year agoReply
@ryuwelp00 Aw, thank you XD I actually haven't been on Commaful that long but I already love it! Lol, gotta love Roromiya ;)

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a year agoReply
This is by far one of the best short stories I've read on here!! Also really happy that you're on Commaful, I'm ryuwelp00 on Wattpad! Same profile picture I see XD

SomewhereintimeBronze CommaI like cookies. Oh yeah and writing too.
a year agoReply
@shadowedechoes thank you. It means a lot XD

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a year agoReply
This was stunning!