Emptiness
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shatteredpiecesWriter+Singer+Reader+Fangirl=Me
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About a person who bottles up their emotions and feels like they are turning into a different person.

Emptiness

by statteredpieces

As I stare outside my window, my eyes start to swell.

Tears began to form.

Soon they trickle down.

I feel a pang of loneliness.

My heart begans to ache. Soon it falls apart.

I then feel an emptiness.

No need for love.

I only feel the pain. Nothing else.

I lost the hope. That I once had.

People say that i'm heartless, but why would I be writing these emotions out?

There are no more tears to shed.

The tears are dried.

And the old me is gone.

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sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
5 months agoReply
This is sooo well written. Extremely relatable. Can see myself and many friends through the eyes of this poem

shatteredpiecesWriter+Singer+Reader+Fangirl=Me
5 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Awe why thank you!!! :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
5 months agoReply
This is a lugubrious masterpiece. You conveyed the scene of this twisted soul's agony in detail with few words. Great job!!