It Used to be Beautiful
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sass9090
sass9090 An amateur poet looking for feedback.
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For everyone who can’t communicate with their partner, and not for lack of trying.

I’m new here and could use some pointers.. all feedback welcomed and appreciated!

It Used to be Beautiful

Your silence is betrayal. Pain falls on deaf ears.

Your silence is betrayal. Pain falls on deaf ears. You told me I broke us, confirming my fears.

Ive become a great burden, we’re back in this place.

Ive become a great burden, we’re back in this place. And you won’t admit that this is the case.

You sit me in quiet

You sit me in quiet because I’ve worked up a debt

You sit me in quiet because I’ve worked up a debt of bad memories and pain, so we’re hardly there yet.

If the guilt doesn’t kill me, the quiet surely will.

If the guilt doesn’t kill me, the quiet surely will. My mind is a burden so She gives me the pills.

Surely I don’t feel more than you do. That, I can guarantee.

Surely I don’t feel more than you do. That, I can guarantee. But I have the strength to say It is possible it’s me

I’ll swallow the poison So that we won’t fight

I’ll swallow the poison So that we won’t fight I’ll carry that with me,

I’ll swallow the poison So that we won’t fight I’ll carry that with me, Suffocating at night.

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