The last day
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samimsalemWords of the soul the head and the heart
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The last day

by samimsalem

​Angels fighting and demons all around ​Darkness spreading and light going into the ground

​Hell is rising and heaven is sinking People running the world is ending

​Water is flooding , buildings breaking And time is wasted , our dreams never been tasted

​we go roaming the world looking for things to survive Instead of helping the earth to revive

​Didn't you think you'll be the one to fight you are the one that's going to step up and seek us light

​You are the one who's gonna remove what's bad You were so full of hope , what happened to that

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samimsalemWords of the soul the head and the heart
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you for the lessons and help you give and for the support

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
That was a well done poem. The technical aspects were inviable. The message and theme were impeccable. I think you should re-read it and you'll notice a few lumps here and there than could be smoothed.

samimsalemWords of the soul the head and the heart
a year agoReply
@sydney thank you

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a year agoReply
Beautiful!!