Soul Surgery
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rues25I don't accept defeat
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Soul Surgery

by rues25

Like the depth of the sea so deep is my wound

My feelings have become a shadow in bondage

Chained beyond restoration but with desire to be free

The words rumbling in my head are ...................................... SCEAAAAAAMMMMM

Everywhere i go space seems to be closing up on me I am losing my breath like i am in outta space , mars where i am a stranger

I am cracking , cranking , crushing "screeeeeeaaaaammmm"

My hands hold out , tears rolling down , finally chains breaking i just sreammmm

This is the last of my breath , eyes closed heart shattered , the universe spinning . Suddenly above my head slowly drifting i could hear ......................................

"Somebody call 911"

Ruttling tools is all i could hear , my heart was bleeding and they couldn't help me

Crushing .................................................................... Crumbling..................................................................... ONLY THE SOUL NEEDS SURGERY

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rues25I don't accept defeat
10 months agoReply
thank you ,i am honored

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
This was powerful. It was a tour-de-force of emotion. The techniques you used in arranging your wording and stanzas was ingenious. Great job!!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
10 months agoReply
Woww. You can do it!!