Thank-yous in the description //
@Animekitty1 Gurl...you know I am your biggest fan...obviously, because I comment all 25 of your daily pieces...You are not just the soul of this place, but honestly...an absurdly brilliantly good writer. I know I don't hold a candle to you, which is why I need to use all epilepsy-inducing flashy gimmicks. But not you...you are so raw and incredible. This place would not be the same without you. I hope to keep seeing your usual barrage of posts every day...for EVAR! And remember...The Spider-Chicken has your back.GUNTHEMBITCHESDOWN!
@soothrain Jeez...I have said this a couple of times before, but you are the Queen-Mother of this joint (to me at least) Not only are you insanely supportive and loving, your writing has got some serious clout! (I reserve that word for you only). I am just so glad you are a part of this community...
Reading your comments makes my day! Plus you a DBZ fan... o.0
@goldenratio0618 You were the first person I met from Commaful, and you made me laugh my ass off n o n s t o p! Still, do daily. I appreciate you! (fistbump) You are too cool bro and you really care about the people here. They are lucky to have you around. I adore you, and you are a terrific and very mature writer.
@googlepoems dude...you are nutz...keep slaying it and watch out with the Vodka. Maybe try wine instead...
@in Girl...what the fuck? I have shouted your pieces so many times that my profile is like 20% your stories. They are THAT good. And you are a wonderful human being, who happens to be dominating this site like Kobe!
I can not think of anyone that deserves that more. As the chicken would say: Keep slaying it!
@hanniecakes We talk on three different platforms. What haven't I said? You are so unique! ^^ To me: the sweetheart of Commaful. Some people could think you are all pink and fluffy (I mean your nickname is "Hanniecakes"...) but you are dark gurl...I can feel it. Your writing is so fricking good, unpretentious, raw and warm to the heart & soul. You can't miss.
@edie_taylor You are hands down one of the most creative writer /storyteller messing around in this site. I pretty much steal most of my ideas from you (but don't tell anyone). Also, I love your taste in music (it inspired many pieces I did), AND you are seriously funny too. Keep it up. You gonna be a star.
@friedchicken Babe...GOD DAMN...you make me want to curse! :D ...What else can I tell you that I haven't drunk-texted you at 3 am? You are too much. I have no words to describe you. Your writing leaves me speechless...which as you might have guessed already, is QUITE the feat.
@sydney (and the Commaful staff) Bro...I feel I can you bro. I hope that's ok. This site you guys have created has incalculable value to all of us using it. I can't imagine a more supportive and brilliant community for all these fine people that make a part of it. I hope you are fucking proud of yourself. Much love and cheers to you!
@Everyone I follow: Respect. Special mention to @sassmyass1 and sugar_cupcake. You are both just ...GRRRRRRRR! Badass...
@Everyone else: I have seen in awe at how much much better you get with every single piece. So much so, I keep telling everyone I know that will listen. It is just incredible, and it fills my heart with joy.
To those, I did not mention: I hope I can get to know more of you over time and that you stay and keep writing!
To anyone new or that I am not following: I am always reading the "latest" section and looking at your pieces. I'll find you <3
@To anyone with Epilepsia: I am sorry.
Wubalubadubdub bitches!
Quick & DIR TY T h e E n d A3PARTSeries
Open Spotify and play in the background ♪ “No Man’s Land” ♪ by Zack Hemsey
...
"In every real man
"In every real man a child is hidden
"In every real man a child is hidden that wants to play"
"In every real man a child is hidden that wants to play" -Friedrich Nietzsche
...
It's the life I don't think I have
That's what I want
It's there, I know
It's the frantic call
from friend and foe
I'd step in
but I'm afraid I'll go
...
....
What is this?
Where am I?
don't tell me that.
Where am I?!
don't tell me what to do!
I want out.
please stop this!
no, it is NOT going to be ok!
I can't breath...
please make it stop...
hello?
Hello?!
please?...
I don't like this anymore...
let me out...
but dissolution does not scare you
you wish it'd be that easy
If a crucifixion was all it took to fix you
I'd thank the Gods burn down with you
I'd come back on the third
to do it again
Only life's a bitch
I'm stuck HERE with you
...
l o o k
I need h e l p
I don't know what to do
I don't know how to do it
I don't know...
I don't...
know...
I'm stuck HERE with you.
I'm stuck heRE with YOu?
I'm stuck here with YOU..
I'm stuck here with YOU...
I'm stuck here with YOU R
...the fu...a what?
♩ ♫
Seriously?
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Fine
Let's do this...
*Sickest beat is dropped*
♪ This place is messing with my head ♫
♪ This place is gnawing at my soul ♫
♪ I don't know really for how long ♫
♪ I'll be able to stare into your soul ♫
♪ Now every night I call upon the genie ♫
♪ Rub it down and let it pour ♫
♪ But it's just no longer helping ♫
♪ It's all caught up with me ♫
♪ Now I hear it every night ♫
♪ It's the soundtrack of your SOUL ♫
*t u n p u m*
*p a a h* *p u m* *'u n*
*t u n p u m*
*P A A H* *p u m* *'u n*
*T U N p u m*
*P A A H* *P U M* *'n*
*TUN PUM*
*P U M* *'n*
*T U N P U M*
*PAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH*
|| o || __||___ /|\ __||__ |______|________ / \ _________|_____|
|| o/ || __||___ /| __||__ |______|_______ / \ _________|_____|
♪ This place is messing with my head ♫ || \o/ || __||___ | __||__ |______|_________ /\ ________|_____|
♪ This place is gnawing at my soul ♫ || o_ || __||___ <| __||__ |______|________ / } _______|_____|
♪ I don't know really for how long ♫ || o || __||___ <|> __||__ |______|_________( ) ________|_____|
♪ I'll be able to stare into your soul ♫ || o/ || __||___ /| __||__ |______|________ / \ ________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// ||
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ Now all I | || || | | || || | ever I do | || || | | || || | is wonder ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || <o> || __||___ | __||__ |______|________ / \________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ I dare not | || || | | || || | even ask ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || o_ || __||___ <| __||__ |______|________ / }________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ I'm just not | || || | | || || | strong enough | || || | | || || | to take it ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || \o/ || __||___ | __||__ |______|________ / \________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ it's the calling | || || | | || || | It's the calling | || || | | || || | of your soul! ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || <o> || __||___ | __||__ |______|________ / \________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ I hear it | || || | | || || | where I go ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || _ o || __||___ /\ __||__ |______|________ | \________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ become weaker | || || | | || || | by the dawn ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || o _ || __||___ /\ __||__ |______|_________ / |________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ Now every night | || || | | || || | I call upon | || || | | || || | the genie ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || || __||___ __\o __||__ |______|________/) |_______|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ Rub it down | || || | | || || | and it let it | || || | | || || | pour ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || __| || __||___ \o __||__ |______|________ ( \ _______|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ But it's all | || || | | || || | no longer | || || | | || || | helping ♫ | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || \ / || __||___ | __||__ |______|________/o\________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ It's all caught up | || || | | || || | with me ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || |__ || __||___ o/ __||__ |______|________ / )________|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ Now it visits | || || | | || || | every night ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || || __||___ o/__ __||__ |______|________ | (\______|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | ♪ it's the | || || | | || || | soundtrack ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || o _ || __||___ /\ __||__ |______|________ / | _______|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | | || || | ♪ of your soul ♫ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || \ o / || __||___ | __||__ |______|________ / \ _______|_____|
//////----------------------\\\\\\ || | | || || | | || || | \m/(>.<)\m/ | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || | | || || \\\\ - - - - - - - - - - -//// || || || || \ o / || __||___ | __||__ |______|_________/ \________|_____|
\o/ | /\ ♪ This place is messing with my head ♫
o_ <| / } ♪ This place is gnawing at my soul ♫
o <|> ( ) ♪ I don't know really for how long ♫
o/ /| / \ ♪ I'll be able TO ♫
o/ /| / \ ♪ I'll be able T O ♫
o/ /| / \ ♪ I'll be able to stare in your SOUL! ♫
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