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ritika
ritikaJust a thinker, bleeding ink into rhythm
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Just a hand at picture poetry.On the spot and quickly written!Thanks to Sydney and team! 😊

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by Ritika Insta: ehsans_err1585

I don't have words I don't know what to write

These temprory slides I will explore and write

Furance of passion Igniting my flames of action

I wonder the cosmos Is not playing!

And those blurry days I remember

When I sat down Talking my heart out to you Oh! Lovely nature.

Cold I felt whenever

I sit back with you, resting my hands on my knees, Which crossed and sat on you.

Oh! Those blurry memories! Won't you remember?

Come on now! I can't wait no more! You promised me oh, beautiful! Won't you remember?

Why won't you let my story be heard? Oh, why? Won't you remember me ?

... Hope you liked it! Be free to correct and suggest! 😇😇

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9 months agoReply
@erofaer I'm overwhelmed! I'm... Just thank you! Thank you soo much! 😇😇

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Your words are killing me it's so gorgeous. On the spot poetry is lovely, sometimes that's all you need. It just rolls right off and you've created a masterpiece.

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@bernardtwindwil I feel so blessed! 😇 I don't know what to say? What more does a struggler and a novice want to know, say!? Thank you that's all I can say. Thank you!😇😇

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10 months agoReply
You did an excellent job. When one is a staggering talent like you are, it is a pleasure to see spurts of creativity. Your word choice delivered your message clearly but not so clearly as to be mundane. This piece had a tremendous depth and breadth of thought. I loved it. I love your work. You are a treasure> Great job!!!!