...Death or Someone...
...Death or Someone... dark stories
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ritika
ritikaJust a thinker, bleeding ink into rhythm
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A quick write.< br/>Love abstract and dark poetry!

...Death or Someone...

by Ritika (aka err1585)

I chase for light On those dark nights

I am an island And no one is their to hold me.

I chase for hope Inside those barren memories!

I get colder and colder, with every walk on those chilly dead roads.

But darkness won't leave me. Come hold me! I want a spark,

To step back to illumination! To get back to youth!

I promise to never be the same again! I promise to change! Please hold my hand now...Take me away!

... ... ...

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10 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil yeah. I agree. I try to write hopeful, no matter even if it goes darker. Don't know why. Thank you in between. 😇

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
This was indeed dark. But it was not cloyingly maudlin. The poem had substance though it was abstract. I lovet it. Great poem!!!!