When I discovered
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A story about a girl, with a very special feature, in love.

When I discovered

by redthegreat1

I killed you and hide you near the forest by the sea. No one has to know about this. Calming my nerves, I gave it one last look before leaving.

It didn't have to be like this, we could have gotten married. We had our whole life in front of us, a future set sure.

I remember when we first met, it was during the winter. December 23rd, 2014 to be exact. My car broke down and I asked you to give me a ride.

Never could we have imagined that yours would break down as well. So that December for the first time, I spent Christmas with someone. Even though you were a stranger, we had a great time.

After that, we kept in contact, New Year, Easter, Birthdays,

And before I knew it, I couldn't stop thinking about you. And I thought you felt the same when you proposed to me that night, December 23rd, 2016.

I forgot that you were a busy bee, always on the run, always kept me waiting, because I didn't think it was a problem until you left me waiting. Waiting at my altar.

Everybody's eyes on me, as the flashback, passed by me.

That's when I realised you never loved me.

So, I did what I did best. I killed you.

And in the shower, that's where I discovered that nobody would love a killer.

You were not in love, just in the fear.

And I, in illusion.

So I returned, to the way I always was,

A bloody cold-hearted murderer.

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3 months agoReply
@charliesheldon Thanks!

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3 months agoReply
Very cool story!

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3 months agoReply
The words that you wrote were felt by me, your way of writing definitely keeps me want to know whats gonna happen next. An amazing thriller story.

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4 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you!

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4 months agoReply
Very well written psycho-thriller. Just because you kill people, doesn't mean your crazy, does it? I loved this. Stay with this story. Great story!!!!